|Reviews for Insertion|
| Flen99 chapter 67 . 7/20
Ok, so I usually wait till the last chapter than I drop a bomb of questions and views. But this whole thing of her having sex and them being upset is funny and sad at the same time. They basically said" we're going to mess around with hatoru, and eventually more girls in future. We don't give to craps about how you feel about it, you can go die of misery while we do things with girls while your she does something with a guy while the rest of them are SLEEEP. They didn't even experience it. They should be upset, they should be pissed, but they can't hate her. They literally told her that her feelings are unimportant and that they were going to do whatever they felt like. Then they got revenge on her. And then ranma became worse than carrot. Even pissant wanted revenge. How would they react if they had to be awake like she was? I feel like it's great plot though, it really shows how selfish the collective is. I didn't expect them to willingly have sex with a guy for her, it's the response that gets me.
| Shadowpawzzz chapter 94 . 7/4
| Coffee chapter 16 . 4/15
"the disks it played were no larger than a quarter. They were capable of holding
information thousands of times greater than a DVD disk according to the boy."
Heh, so they hold about as much as a modern cheap HDD? Ho boy nothing makes this story show its age more than that line.
| The Richmaster chapter 4 . 11/16/2016
Wow, just wow
| HenryPuser chapter 85 . 1/1/2016
The biggest bullsht this chapter are, shape shifter cant complete copy the strength, power or material component of the being they copied, and Ekitai never got 5000x gravity training, and he from Earth for at least 10 millenia, if that true then he stronger than Metalia or L-sama, but cant release themself or himself from Berryl or Metalia space seal? Even from the start, the character combined is full of crap, 2 fanfic writer and Ranma character... Genma (ordinary martial arts human) Nodoka (Berryl) Saiyan Ranma? what a retard writer!
| Guest chapter 94 . 12/22/2015
This being seemingly left to rot makes me sad. It was extremely well written for an insert and the many plots that are neatly tied into the whole make it a blast to read.
Thank you for giving us at least this much,
Sorry you didn't continue this,
| tarrangar chapter 84 . 5/25/2015
Hope someone kill the Emperor of jurai on pure principle, anyone who would pay people to kill of every intelligent being on a planet deserve to get sent to hell as fast as possible.
| shugokage chapter 94 . 5/13/2015
Definitely a truly unique and interesting story!
| Guest chapter 75 . 4/1/2015
Well Ranma and Herb's relationship is interesting to say the least, Still an awesome story to read even if it takes a while. Not many last this long or entertaining.
| ADriveByReviewer chapter 94 . 3/27/2015
I mostly laugh reading the A.N. about you planning to finish this in two or three more chapters as the last update this story seems likely to get. Though given the gap between 93 and 94 I won't put it past you to update 8 years later. Though I'd then imagine your plan is to upload chapter 96 sixteen years after that and so on...
Pretty silly story with it's share of flaws, but still damn good writing for this site and the multi-cross area. Shame it's left unfinished.
| Guest chapter 85 . 2/4/2015
Giving evil ranma a hyperbolic time chamber and bringing in majin buu ruins what was once an amazing story
| Guest chapter 84 . 2/4/2015
Your story has so many good points till you go and put in something stupid like majin buu
| Guest chapter 59 . 2/3/2015
You made ranma/yohiko the almighty boss of urd-belldandy-skulds father the previous almighty that means no one can weaken or limit him and sending him to a universe like the one yohiko is in completely ruins what was an amazing story especially by limiting his powers and making him human which is impossible since he's the new almighty weakening him like that would destroy the multiverse
| xThomas2 chapter 5 . 12/14/2014
British Jap finds telephone booth of Doctor only for it to disappear
| Guest chapter 94 . 4/3/2014
my god, a few more chapters and it would be finished...And we the readers would probably never even see them. FUCK.