|Reviews for Just for 30 days|
| shiloah18 chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
hmm.. SaixLacus, ne? how did that happened.. weird.. *scratches her head* nyWeiZ, Kira & CagaLLi are twins, ne? which means.. when CagaLLi ceLebrated her birthday.. Kira shouLd've tOo.. I kinda agrEe in your A/N.. I mean.. who wouLdn't? since this was your first.. I wouLdn't compLain that much.. that's why their first's.. *sighs* this was a suteki fic! ;p
| Disturbed Insomniac chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
NO! NOT MY KIRA! *cries and cries util practically drowns in sea of tears* wow... i love it... so sad... i like the message in this... *smiles*
| Storm Wolf77415 chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
When I saw Phase-50, it just plain bothered me that Flay died without telling Kira how she really felt. It bothered me for the better part of a week! So I wrote my story in response to it. From where the Freedom was, Kira would not have been, to me at least, in a position to keep the shuttle from being destroyed. I had created Sebastian Connor, as a character for a possible AU novelization of Gundam SEED, and figured he could lend a hand in saving Flay.
As for Flay singing, "Hero" is one of my favorite songs, and in her eyes, give Kira the strength he needed to destroy Providence, and save the world.
| LiLAyeka7 chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
That was so great! But shouldn't of made Kira die though, but you wanted to teach us a lesson i understand. I love Kira/Flay pairings! Buy the way how did Sai get Lacus? hm... Anyway keep up the good work!:)
Form a major Kira/Flay fan: LiLAyeka7 also i wanted to say, I HATE LACUS, SHE IS ANNOYING!
| Kite Impulse chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
aw...thats so sweet...sniff...
BTW:thanks for reviewing "Writers block"
| xeno chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
ITS FREAKING SAD (CRYING) BUT ITS GOOD
| Glitter Asylum chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
That's so sad...and that "ann" girl isn't all that mature...
| ann chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
i hate the paring and most of all i want her to die not kira. I HATE YOU WHO EVER WRITE THE F*ING STORY and besides i am glad that kira leave whats her name
:) : :p :(
| sammy-chick11 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
ok um like it was good but its not frey its fllay or other people write flay but there is no frey
| heavens-gaze chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
I have to admit that was better then some of the other ones i have read in the past six months, for a one chapterer...for a 1 chapter story. But try readin some of the other 1 chapter stories, that would give u and idea as to wat u need to do to improve. But hey...wat do i know, i've never put a story like this online before. So good story
| harpies ladies chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
well...a little rushed there but i like the plot. hope u write more kira/flay and next time make longer chapters. not bad.