Reviews for Broken
Rockangel101 chapter 10 . 5/14/2014
I really like this story.
Good job!:-)
haydenrocks14 chapter 10 . 4/7/2006
I seriously think i am going to cry my eyes out. It was so cute, but that last seen was so depressing. I don't wanna think about them leaving Hogwarts! :'(
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 10 . 8/25/2005
great fic! good job! :) liked it loads
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 9 . 8/25/2005
cute fluffy loved it!
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 8 . 8/25/2005
oh soon dey r bk together!
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 7 . 8/25/2005
i liked d ending of dis chapter
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 6 . 8/25/2005
i do bliv wat harry said was right. gud job
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 5 . 8/25/2005
i feel so sry 4 ron lol
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 4 . 8/25/2005
oh no, snape sure did ruin d whole thing
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 3 . 8/25/2005
oh my god! y do pplz like snapey exist?
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 2 . 8/25/2005
poor ronnie :D
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
a very good beginning
BuckNC chapter 10 . 5/17/2005
Not bad, not bad at all. The ending was a little bit anti-climax with the fight/argument scene between Hermione/Ron and Dewey. Didn't really care for the fact that Dewey took off in fear of Hermione but not Ron.

Also I noticed that you didn't really use any magic in this story. Which could've really been used to spice up the Prom dance. After all one of the great things about HP is the magic. You didn't use any.

Still not bad for a first timer. And yes I have to admit the grammar is better than mine. Except for the misspelling of Dumbledore, of course.
BuckNC chapter 6 . 5/17/2005
Excellent Chapter! Got to give you credit for chapter 6. The emotions were very much in character. A little bit short, but definately an excellent chapter to read.
BuckNC chapter 4 . 5/17/2005
Actually, not bad at all. Other than the misspelling. How could you misspell Dumbledore? You did it several times, so it's not a typo.

Still, the last part of Chapter 4 was your best. If it was me I would make that last part your Chapter 1. It read brilliantly. The dialog, and the emotions are very in character for both of them.

Also, it would be a much easier read if Ron's thoughts were in Italics.
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