|Reviews for Remebrance: The Story of Amnesia|
| moritynz chapter 7 . 6/4/2008
This story is mean dude.
You need to update more.
| epw chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
So... umm... "he also knew how to speak American"...
Yeah that about did it for me.
| JhyarelleDrakon chapter 7 . 4/25/2007
| griffenvamp chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
please update this story ans tell who is hitomi father is hun?
| Wonderbee31 chapter 7 . 2/22/2006
Great section here, and now, looks like things are getting ready to get desperate soon.
| Innortal chapter 7 . 2/22/2006
| Wonderbee31 chapter 6 . 1/8/2006
Hmm, so now Nabii is communicating, and it also looks like the sisters have started to come ack together some, so can't wait to see what hapens when the company comes for Ranma now.
| Innortal chapter 6 . 1/7/2006
Not bad. Very nice job with the addition, and I definitely did not see the succubus twist.
| griffenvamp chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
| pspinler chapter 2 . 11/21/2005
The continuity doesn't make sense.
For instance, how could he be in recovery for a year in the hospital and not know about his curse? Certainly the hospital would have found out as soon as they bathed him, and told him about it during recovery.
In fact, since s/he was pulled out of a body of water, Ranma would have been female when admitted to the hospital in the first place.
Also, there are continuity problems with the credit card and floppy disk. The hospital and/or authorities would have seen all the same info on those that Nabiki saw, and asked Ranma the same questions Nabiki asks based on their contents.
Further, whatever agency did stuff with/to him would easily be able to track him by the payment(s) from that credit card to the hospital. Not to mention news about a badly burned anonymous man being admitted to the hospital. He'd not have made it out alive.
The only way this makes sense is to eliminate the hospital stay entirely. Either have non-seriously injured, so he recovers on his own, or have him taken care of by some family or person or something.
I'd suggest changing the story so that Nabiki (or perhaps even better, Tofu) finds Ranma-onna in the water.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 5 . 10/24/2005
Good chapter here, and looking forward to how Ranma copes with Cat-Nabiki, as well as how things continue on for the rest of the cast.
| Innortal chapter 5 . 10/24/2005
Very lovely. It was an excellent chapter. I look forward to seeing if what will pop up next.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 4 . 8/12/2005
Nice cliffhanger, and looking forward to see who is the person in the shadows, as well as what it'll mean for the budding relationship between Ranma and Nabiki, now that Shampoo's came back, (she can't stay away, lol).
| Wonderbee31 chapter 3 . 8/12/2005
Looking like a real good story here, and now things are definitely heating up, with Ranma and Nabiki, as well as whoever it was that Ranma worked for at one time.
| Innortal chapter 3 . 8/12/2005
Much better than blowing up a school off the bat.
Looking forward to seeing what more comes about.