Reviews for Stand On Ceremony
Fire-n-Ice4 chapter 1 . 5/29
I loved it! They were both in characters and I loved how you potrayed their feelings. The unique depth of their relationship was wonderfully potrayed.
astroshadow chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
I wasn't trying to tell you that you're wrong about the ranking I was just telling you what I knew about it :)
I think you're take on it is perfectly fine :)
astroshadow chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
FMA ranks most closely resemble American military ranks I believe - and private is the lowest rank- I've looked up the wiki as well and it matches perfectly except that certain ranks seem to be omitted .
I notice the American military rank system is also the most commonly used in FMA fanfiction though I don't know if that's more just a reflection of the writer demographic or canon accuracy

Love the story!
nix chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
that was great unlike others there was a story before they hooked up
gtgrandom chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
UGHHHH SO PERFECT. I love these two. You write so freaking well, and they were both spot on. Nice. REAL NICE
Shinymudkip25 chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Wow. This was amazing. Everyone keeps saying it, but you managed to capture the emotions you needed perfectly. Roy and Riza were both in character throughout the whole story, which was really nice to see.
This-Is-The-Beat-Of-My-Heart chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Lusaay chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
That was beautiful. The ending was adorable. Oh my gosh, when Gariena told everyone about Mustang wanting to go back to the hotel for Hawkeye... I was fangirling and screaming "THAT'S SO ADORABLE". XD I love Royai so much, and I'm really glad that I found this fanfiction. Good work! :D
the manliest man chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Well written and simple. The nice writing makes the story very easy to understand. The story itself is a gem :) Both Roy and Riza are very in-character and this story portrayed their relationship well :'D

In short: I really like thisssssss 3 3 3
Jodles chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Love it! 3
MistyDelusions chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Easily one of my favorite Royai fanfics here. I love how you wrote this. I could clearly imagine the scenes playing in my mind. Makes me wish this really happened in the stories. Awesome job here.
adelaidemiller chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I haven't read a Royai 'short story' as such in a long time, and I really like this one. Particularly how you've intertwined some elements from the FMA manga/anime to create it.
komayaka kaze chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
nice. i don't think you've to worry about the ranks when you have a good plot and story in your hand. it's nice to know, roy really did care for her.
Bellus Animi chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Wonderful story, very well-written. I have to favorite it :)
Alyice chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
This was wonderful. D I'm glad I found this. Wonderfully written.
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