Reviews for Unexpected
I am wolf chapter 5 . 5/25
Anyonomous chapter 6 . 5/8
I am extremely sorry to sound like an ELAR teacher as I have the same problem but please check your spelling errors. Fallowed is actually followed Weather means what's outside for example the weather is hot today the real way to write it is whether now means in this instant no is a refusal. I am, again extremely sorry to be the grammar police but this story is really original and cool but personally my eye is beginning to twitch at the spelling ( I think I've been reading too many Gothic books...)
KurosakiLuna chapter 6 . 11/29/2015
Are u gunnar finish it and the head things from a previous chapter are nargals
Goose chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
Guest chapter 6 . 12/30/2014
i love it
Winged-Ashes chapter 6 . 10/29/2014
plz update soon
Remus' daughter chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
I love this I hope your insperation returns
Padfootette chapter 6 . 6/4/2014
Great story I loved it please please please update soon
Mukuro234 chapter 6 . 5/1/2014
Awe this is such a great fic.. Love it
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
So, I hate for my first review to be me correcting you on stuff, but Dumbledore's name is not Doubledore, or Doubledor. I really am sorry about this. But other than that, you have excellant writing, a very good plot-line, and gosh do I hate the Dursley's! Also, Ron... just give in. There's no point in resisting the magical bouncing ferret.
Gaia-sama chapter 6 . 10/26/2013
Continue...Its excellent story...
evfangirl98 chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
love it!
DemeRain chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
Thanks for sharing.
blackbloodywolf chapter 6 . 6/11/2012
so sweet
That-Lady chapter 6 . 6/10/2012
First off, I love your plot and your story line. very interesting. Sadly my enjoyment was severely dampened by the fact you don't know how to spell. There were several mistakes that were homophones. where they sound the same but are spelt totally different, that you made consistently and a couple of what seemed to be "auto-correct" mistakes, also a couple grammar mistakes (your/you're, they're/their/there, and to/too/two). please get a beta soon (I'd offer but I'm not qualified)! I love your story.
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