Reviews for Harry Potter and The Power Within
yoda says chapter 9 . 9/6/2016
Rushed it is feels like the work of darksiders preventing you from wrighting complete full depth story humm. It seem like people are just talking on answering machines and responding to the messages in a detached sort of way humm very quick
back n forth. Like watching a tennis match it is. Each player is a person and the ball is the conversation. very tiring to watch is in it humm.
reinforced hell chapter 10 . 6/23/2015
I LOVE these types of stories! I Hope that you have not discontinued the story.
reinforced hell chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
This is the second time reading this, and I'm still enjoying it!

Although the earlier chapters make me a bit squeamish, the rest of the chapters definitely make up for it. I do hope that you continue on with the story, as it has given me many hours of entertainment with what is already here.
reinforced hell chapter 14 . 6/15/2015
What?! It's chapter 14 already?!

Sad, sad panda.
reinforced hell chapter 5 . 6/15/2015
I find this quite comical, I thank you for your time in writing this. It is quite good.

Oh the warm fuzzy feelings when good things happen to the protagonist!
reinforced hell chapter 3 . 6/15/2015
ooooooohhhhhhhh Damn!
reinforced hell chapter 2 . 6/15/2015
Okay, this is... different.
ColourPages chapter 14 . 4/11/2015
Kind of silly, but enjoyable to read!
ColourPages chapter 6 . 4/11/2015
I'm really enjoying this so far
sebastien1886 chapter 14 . 7/30/2014
more more MORE. This is highly amusing.
chris chapter 14 . 12/4/2013
very great story i hope you decide to continue it and that your still writing fanfiction.
Blake2020 chapter 9 . 3/19/2013
Blake2020 chapter 8 . 3/19/2013
nice wow
Blake2020 chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
Blake2020 chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
nice chapter
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