|Reviews for The Holy War|
| Winterrain chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
This is pretty (by which I mean very) old, so I'm sorry for reviewing it, but I loved the idea. The tone is just right for this sort of thing.
| Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Still great stuff. If you write more stories in the same timeline, maybe you could add extra chapters. The bit about Jesus-Martin James clarifies a few things.
Something i've always wanted to ask you; Sunny, and the girl in 'On Rotation' both have short dark hair. Are they connected?
| Tindomiel chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Can't sign in, but this 'story' is still absolutely brilliant. I love the concepts behind it, its textbook style, but soft manner, the phrases used. In particular I loved the word 'theocracy'. Sheer genius.
Having not read your other work, I don't understand the stuff about Peter Joyce and Arthur Shire. Is Elizabeth Boreal a canon character and if so/not, how did she cause Lyra's death?
Great story/essay, and extremely absorbing.
| Ceph Cepheus chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Ah! You write again! A jolly good read Ceres. I hope you haven't thrown in the towel just yet.
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
i really enjoyed this