Yeah, eww is one word for it. Non-word really. What happens next? Please keep writing!

Well then Im a very bad writer too because I start every story with no idea of the end. Which is probably why most never finish. What is OOC?

I dont think Kenshin and the West have ever been mixed, but they should have! I love the West and Kenshin, and this story is great! What is a bounty hunter exactly?

It's going well. I like Kenshin waxing lyrical, so its ok if he's philosophical! _

good fic

Hey, no problem! Besides, it's a lot of fun to get those chapters a couple days earlier than everyone else (lol).

One wonders what new twists and turns the story will take from here. It'll definately be interesting!

~*Lynn*~

"A horse of a different color"? I seem to remember that quote from a certain movie whose introduction had a western theme.

For me to be your beta, all you have to do is send me your finished chapter of any story (i.e: this one, the "Tolling Bell", etc.) in an e-mail (make sure that it's in a seperate folder so I can proofread it or give any helpful comments as needed). In the body of the e-mail, if there's anything you don't want me to touch (i.e: if you don't want any critical comments, if you need a particular time to get the chapter back, if you have a particular question about something, etc.) please do say so. A beta reader is supposed to be the author's second eyes, so to speak.

An all-around good chapter, though! Your author notes are very helpful.

~*Lynn*~

Kenshin in the wild west is a great idea. Kenshin (or Kaoru) Clint Eastwood? lol. Oh, and I like how you explain stuff in the author's notes. It keeps me in the loop. _

Wow . . .that was amazing! I can't believe someone else actually thought of doing a western as well. I absolutely love your writing style. You are very discriptive and I find myself immensly drawn into your story. You do action scenes much better than I could . . .and I'm actually having to wrk on one right now in MOK.( Mail Order Kenshin) Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon!

~Kairi7~

i like this plz update soon

Ahh, a new story, I see. Interesting start. I liked how you used the vivid descriptions of the scenery to sort of "play out" (if you will) what happened to the ranch. Ol' Southern talk, ne? I'm almost surprised the characters didn't say the word, "y'all,", lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

~*Lynn*~