Reviews for Knowing
Anfitrite-aquarius chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
so cute *_* great fic!
Queendel chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Intense and emotional. I like it that Heph found someone, and that he was not pinning away awaiting Alexander's pleasure.

It gave me joy that Alexander was the jealous and insecure one, the partner trying to make up. Well done.

It would be wonderful if you wrote another chapter.

Seasons greetings.
Baliansword chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Well written. At the end Alexander and Hephaestion seem to make up so to speak. I think that you should add another chapter, where they make up in a more physically inimate way. It would tie up some of the sexual tension in the story.
gala-granger chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I liked it. It's nice, cute, and poetic. Keep writing!
Neroon chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
If you're 13, you write quite well. I, too, think that no one meant as much to Alexander as Hephaestion did.
Valo chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Beautiful.. very, very beautiful.
Anne7 chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Wow. This is really great, especially your age and for this being your first fanfiction. There are a few spelling errors, but not much else I could critique.

However, I think you should correct your summary. Proper spelling and grammar may help draw more people to your story, which I think deserves a better first impression than your summary gives.
BeaumontRulz chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
omg that was so good. lol i saw alexander last week and i had friends giggling on my shoulder lol thru all the gay parts of the movie. which were alot. lol. but i loved this. ur a pretty good writer mate! i dunno if u should do another chpt but if u do i'll read it.

perceptiveyes chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
i though hephaistion would hook up with a pretty lil boy hehe but otherwise this is awesome.

totally made my day (actually my mornin)

nilraen chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
ah isn't letting me sign in! :P oh wells.

juss to reply to some of your wonderful comment -thanks so much!

I am thirteen..yupp yupp fourteen next year on april 14th! :)

I HATE BAGOAS! (for all you bagoas lovers out there, I am sorry.)

and yes he looks like a sissy elf. :P hehe later
beneathe-the-shadows chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
I'm glad you wrote this because thanks to you, hephaistion gets even with Alexander. Its just not fair you know? Hehe... Great fic!
Jamie chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Are you sure you're 13? damn your good!(by the way I'm only 16 p) is it R18 there wherever you're from? (I'm guessing your from the USA) coz here in the philippines its R13. anyway I loved the fic! I hope you make more. Oh and by the way, i totally hate that eunuch guy. And I could've sworn I saw him in LOTR. He looks like an elf.
ZC chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
I like to see hephaistion has another deserve this.()..will you write next chapter? please!
midd chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
ooh yeah, Bagoas the evil sissy! in the movie Alexander was such a dumbhead to let him go.. it's ok that he got married but at least not HIM.

it's nice. i like your story! _
greek freek chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
wow. wow wow wow wow wow. lotsa emotion (which was good) and i liked how hephaistion shared the achilles/patroklus story wit that grl..hehe serves alexander right cos he was ignoring hephaistion.

and i like the name sephoras.

oh. and i must know what happens after this. they go back to camp, ssplash in river, what?
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