|Reviews for To Truly See|
| dancing elf chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
poor seto, even if it's only fiction
a good start to showing challenges of learning to be blind
| LadyPhoenix7777 chapter 4 . 4/26/2008
Great story. You capture a lot of Kaiba's feelings and everything. Poor Mokie has to go through a lot of stuff though for a kid his ag... I hope it turns out good in the end...
PS: Please read my stories too, as I'm also trying to be a great writer too!
| ydjessy chapter 5 . 4/16/2008
I'm really liking your story, but I am wondering is there any pairings in this fic. I seem to like Adriana, she has an attitude to match Kaiba's. But I wonder who was that, that called her, and is the target Seto? Questions, questions and more questions. I hope you update this soon, It would definetly not be fair if you don't.
| dragonheart323 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
i like you that you "lone wolf" attude, and he picking poor Yugi
| Rubai Sora chapter 5 . 3/21/2008
Rarely used concept... Wish there were more fics out there where Kaiba was blind... But I noticed that you put Kaiba and Jonouchi as the main characters. So, I'm guessing Jonouchi should be having a larger role eventualy.
It's a good thing you updated when you did or else I wouldn't have even seen this fic. It's got me so intrested that I decided to wake up early this morning to finish reading it from where I left off last night!
| Alfredo chapter 4 . 5/16/2007
Write it please, it's just so good!Please...(
| Ash Kaiba chapter 4 . 6/19/2006
So far so good. Keep it up. I can't wait for your next update.
| A1tissimo chapter 4 . 3/11/2006
I wish you could finish... ;_;
| MacarenaNeji chapter 4 . 2/6/2006
wOW! THAT IS REALLY GOOD! SORRY i HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN SO LONG, i HAVE'nt been on the computer alot. Any way continue!
| kiafitz chapter 3 . 11/27/2005
Wow, I haven't hit this ff in awhile ''
I came back to see where you were on it
I love your story!
I'll have to re-read it again to see what all has changed later!
Just thought I'd leave this quick little, review thingy!
| Aquawyrm chapter 4 . 11/20/2005
...or November. Could I get an update, please?
| Asj Johnson chapter 2 . 11/7/2005
Is it just me, or does that sound even worse then before? You added to the crash, didn't you...?
And I noticed that Kaiba still has his school jacket on! _ I'm pretty sure he changed clothing a few times in the original.
| Asj Johnson chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Hmm... Yep. Different now.
Kaiba's more in character. But I kind of liked it when he just couldn't take it anymore and walked out.
By the way...
You can delete chapters by logging in, clicking on "stories", clicking the "edit" link beside the story, then clicking on "Content/Chapters" from the top of that page, and it now lists all of your chapters. Just the "del" link beside the chapters you want to delete.
Got it? _
Then when you revise a chapter, people will get a e-mail about the update.
I also noticed something else... The chapter sounds better, but it's not as smooth as it could be. You should re-read it and see what extra words you can take out or maybe add a few in. I always re-read my chapters several times to try to fix the flow of it. I've even gone back to chapter one a few times to add in or replace a few words.
| Asj Johnson chapter 4 . 11/6/2005
Have you been revising your story for the last several months or so?
Just wondering... I've been curious to know whatever happened to you. Just just stopped updating...
So then I'm bored and looking at random stuff and come to the first chapter of your story, and I see a "Revisions have been made to this chapter on 6/27/05" thing.
So... are you still working on this?
I'd like to ask you more stuff, but if you don't have a e-mail address then that would be hard. You can get one, though.
Try going to yahoo com (hopefully that will show up. web addresses don't a lot.) and registering. You should be able to get a Yahoo e-mail account. (in case yahoo doesn't show up, it' o.) I have so many e-mail addresses, myself. I probably only need one...
Please let me know if you're still working on the story... my e-mail's in my profile...