Reviews for Prison Of The Mind
Amazing chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
This is amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
i dont like it. there was no romance
MOONLIGHT73 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
ohfuckthis chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Tofu-Monstrosity chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
OH! this is so cool and a little confusing keep going!
Noon6 chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
That was...uh...weird.
paige chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
I thought that that was a very stupid review! It made no sense whatsoever!

So peeww,

DaphneG chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
I really like this. This is the first story with a sad ending that I really enjoyed!
Rochelleteentitan chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Wow. That was really angsty. My eyes are all teary now. This is going on my favorites. Keep up the good work!
SavvyD chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
wow that was awesome! i really think you should continue!please!
Kingfishers chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
...whoa. That was... whoa. (Gee, aren't I so articulate today.) It was great, just a couple of grammar errors that are easily corrected. But, all in all, you have to do more stuff like this.
Raidersrule76 chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
So... what happened to the rest of the Titans?
inu91 chapter 1 . 12/15/2004 Thats a dark one shot. Awesome job though! Really touched me.
RebelRikki chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
First of all, I have to know if you plan to continue this. It has the potential to be great.


That's right, I said "potential", meaning it's not great yet. The thing that bothered me most was your continual use of "their", "them", and "they" in reference to Starfire. Those pronouns should only be used to refer to more than one person. I understand that you were trying to conceal her identity, but when you mentioned that it was a Titan, and that Robin was in love with her, it left little doubt as to who it was. I suggest fixing all those grammar errors to say "she", "her" , or "hers" and cutting out the more obvious hints, like the fact that it's a Titan, and her "naive yet so intelligent" eyes. They give away the big secret more than her gender would, anyway.


That all said, I did like this chapter a lot. It's not something I've seen before, and being one of the older fans of Teen Titans, I'm liking the darkness. It's a nice break from all the fluffy, twelve-year-old-fantasy fics that are out there (no offense if you happen to be twelve). I just suggest getting a beta that specialises in grammar to look over this, and maybe offer some suggestions.
eventidespirit chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
(adds to fav stories list)

I've already told you what I thought of this piece _, but to repeat, possibly one of your best fics thus far. I love the originality of the angst and the utter darkness of it. You know, this would be a killer prologue for a longer multichapter fic, which slowly dives into how Star loses her sanity and etc if the reasons weren't explictily stated already.