Reviews for Orange Jasmine |
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![]() ![]() Wished you'd continue :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! First of all this is an awesome story, u gotta add more soon. Second, maybe u dont need a conflict, maybe you can just tell the story of their life, marriage and their own children- just an idea but i have no doubt that whatever you wind up writing will turn out wonderful! Plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello I just found your story and boy do you know how to make a person cry... I hope they get marred and add to there little family... and maybe in a dream you can have Maggie and Ryou come to them and give there ok for them to marrey... update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far it's really good Kaiba's children sound so sweet anyway update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, come back PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() I still love it but can u please update soon. |
![]() ![]() I still love the story but could you please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! continue when you get a chance |
![]() ![]() thats really cool you are goin to london. I think that would be really fun but I HATE to fly anywhere. I would be taking a boat for a month before i would fly.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :-) Can't wait for more then! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. I really enjoy reading it. Keep writing! You're good at it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll be waiting~ |
![]() ![]() Please update fast |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Short...but totally awesome. Anyway, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... why is it so boring? and short AND THATS IT THE END? THEY MAKE UP SO? |