I liked your story. The Elves really looked at us as unworthy.

Very nicely done - purposefully short, and meaningful as well. From the narrator's initial revulsion of the fallen Men, to his uncanny observations of the young Man and the blood on his own arm - the flow of his thoughts are easy to follow, and it's almost easy to empathise as he raises his sword against the Man. And yet, the revelation is so poignant, and true. Even with the fall of Morgoth, all the strife he's wrought in Arda will live on as his legacy, and even the best of the Eldar cannot escape it.

Very well done!

I was very impressed at the picture you created with words. it was, is very powerful. You should consider writing longer stories as well. and you may wish to change your settings so you can receive anonymous readers reviews. Good luck and Vala's blessings!

The Mysterious

Jaffee Leeds

Interesting little fic! What a fascinating vantage point and change in the elf with his mercy. I'll have to hunt for more of your works.

Well done!