Reviews for Stargate Arpegia: 101 Beginnings the Teaser
rebelmagnus chapter 2 . 6/7/2008
Natters chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
oh. good chapter. more please
Natters chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
ek. exciting start
KaylaKML chapter 2 . 10/30/2005
Good chap!
SeedC chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Intriguing... Looks like it has been awhile since this was updated (6 months); is it abandoned? Hoping not...
Ryu Suoh chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
ok i am guessing this is set in the first time jack stuck his head inside the ancient database hmm seems like it could be good look forward to the next part
Xander chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
An odd little story which, on the surface, shouldn't work but, in actuality, does.

The descriptions of the situation and the location help greatly in acheiving this and keeps momentum going.

Only problems:

The constant use of the term "Oy", which cheapens it's comedic value and the fact that the writer claims it isn't ship.

It IS ship as far as I am concerned.


Xander McEwan
mishy-mo chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
you drink coffee? didn't think so maybe your jack clone is making coffee for me! very good!
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
That was good. Please write more soon.
sunstorm2 chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
This was highly amusing.

Well, actually I think your comments about your Jack clone were most amusing, but the story ain't half bad either.

So don't keep us waiting too long, or we may lose interest in his kosar.
Mrs-Spacemonkey-Jackson chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
I love Jack. Great first chapter btw. I can't wait for chapter 2! :)
aligater chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
"Sam gazed up at the stars above." I think you're doing it on purpose now...

Do you really want me to write a fic with Sam and a small guitar and singing?

(ANd anyone who's ever heard 'The Owl and The Pussycat' knows what I'm talking about, and knows she's doing it on purpose!)
SG1-Fanfic chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
Good first chapter. :)