Reviews for Irreversible Destiny
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Well, you're going to need a beta; hopefully one that's competent.
DragonGoblet chapter 27 . 7/28/2014
Are you ever going to write a sequel to this? Because I would be extremely happy if you did.
ElijahWinter chapter 14 . 7/13/2014
Dumbledore truly is an unmitigated bastard.
InNeedOfADemensionHopper99 chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
Definitely hooked!
Shadow Dragon3221 chapter 27 . 7/12/2014
Great story, loved to read it as it took me about 4 days to complete. I can't wait for the next story to come out so that I can enjoy the sequel as well. To finish this review of the story, I will comment on a section that could use a little more detail. That section being the first time "Necromancer Ruin" appeared on the battlefield, should include some of the defenders' actions and their thoughts and reactions to the summoned creatures, then what Ruin did in combat form and anything else that'd brighten the picture that is provided by our minds so we can properly create the images in our minds. Take care and please update or post the next story soon. Thanks again and godspeed.
Lavonya chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Poor Harry...
Lavonya chapter 5 . 6/29/2014
No it didn't, it exceeded my expectation!
Lavonya chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
OH... this is wonderful!
Lavonya chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
It was truly exciting!
Lavonya chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
I was hooked on the first segment of chapter 1!
Lavonya chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Love it!
TinaMaki chapter 10 . 5/16/2014
This is pretty cool!
But Harry seems a tad too powerful. It isn't really realistic the way his powers are portrayed...
domi09 chapter 27 . 4/26/2014
it starts out good but gets too bloody complicated. there must be references to at least 4 prophecies and its very hard to keep track of all his powers let alone find them realisticly presented. i like the basic ideas but i have to give up now...this isnt worth the brain power :-)
Mayan.Goddess chapter 2 . 2/25/2014
why are you so good at it? You have me totally hooked up! I'm expecting greatness out of this story.
SW chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I love this story! I've read it twice through, and although there are parts where it tends towards verbosity, it is a fantastic plot with lots of room to develop and twist. Good luck with your future works, and keep writing!

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