Reviews for The Bells That Killed the Blues
Diana2901 chapter 4 . 7/30/2008
I so would have loved the show to go this way. I mean you took some scenes and worked with them and in the end it came to something completely different.

The "I love you"s were the best part.

More please.

Diana
raina chapter 2 . 3/26/2005
emily has the power luke, she has the power! don't listen to emiy, she totaly has the power...

EMILY IS EVIL! (but kelly bishop fills the role completly, and beutifully.)
ecouteuse chapter 3 . 1/28/2005
Audi, you've done a fantastic job here - you've really nailed the characters and the moment. We'll be lucky if the show plays out half as well as your story! Keep writing.

-toni
kckgirl chapter 4 . 1/22/2005
Audi, you're the best at the speculative fics!
LVHamlet chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
The teaser is pretty good, I think you handdled the fact of do your own history and be realistic to the show very well.

I don't believe that Lorelai talks that confident about Luke in front of Rory, but I like it.
screaming truth chapter 4 . 1/4/2005
Wow. Nicely done.

LP
LuvzAfunEthing chapter 4 . 12/26/2004
Wow...I've made you wait awhile for this...i'm sorry...i was gonna review it..um..uh..two weeks ago...but i..uh...i slipped and busted my...eh...it was just me being a rat...lol...(always a GG reference)...actually...you know i've been busy...but i really shoulda did this sooner...anyway...ON WITH THE REVIEW...

1)Thanks again for the shout-out...i feel the love!

2)Wow...Emily..so deceitful...you can tell she's lying...that lying liar...what a wench!...Very big of Lorelai to take the high road and believe her mother...which makes Emily's deceit all the more horrible...We know who the better woman between the two of them is...

3)[LUKE: (Unable to hide his smile) Hey back.]

This is cute...i can see Luke trying to play it all cool...but you know he just melts when he's around her...and vice versa...

4)[LUKE: (Agrees) I know… finally. (Looks at her more closely) You look… beautiful tonight… ugh, I mean you always look beautiful… but you know what I… mean… (Realizes how silly he just sounded).

LORELAI: (Amused) Thank you. And you… look amazing, mister! That suit… wow. (Grins)

LUKE: (Nonchalantly) Oh yes, my girlfriend picked it.

LORELAI: (Plays along) Really? Ah, well she has excellent taste, my friend. So, when are you going to tell her about us?]

-GREAT EXCHANGE...it's cute and sweet...but not "go into sugar shock when you read it" sweet...no pixie sticks here...and i'm lovin' it...

5)[RORY: Hey! I was wondering where the two of you were.

LORELAI: (Winks – then grins) Got a little side-tracked.

LUKE: Ah, geez.

RORY: Enough said. (Looks at Luke) Nice suit, Luke.

LORELAI: (As she sits in the chair that Luke pulls out) His girlfriend picked it.

RORY: Does she know about the two of you?

LUKE: (Rolls his eyes as he takes his seat) Here we go again.]

-lol...Rory is so much like Lorelai...I can really see this convo taking place...these three would make a really great little family...but they've kinda always been a family, in a way...just need to make it offical...

6)Aww...Luke and Lorelai dancing again...Gotta LOVE that!...So cute...This part is good...

[LORELAI: See, this is nice.

LUKE: Yes, it is.

LORELAI: We should do this more often.

LUKE: What? Dance in front of one-hundred wealthy insurance guys?

LORELAI: Aw, come on Luke. You don’t mean that.

LUKE: Actually, I don’t. I am happy I came. It’s a great day for your parents. And you… you look like you’re very happy for them.

LORELAI: (Smiles) I am. (Gives him a quick peck on the lips) You are amazing. (They look at each other – almost dazed).

ANGLE on Emily, watching Luke and Lorelai over Richard’s shoulder.]

-Great interaction...so romantic...and...i love that line Luke says about the insurance guys-SO LUKE-also...they are so in love...and great how you made emily watching them...

7)Just the right amount of Rory and Logan...b/c you know...it should really be the Luke and Lorelai Show...hehe

8)[LORELAI: Oh my God! You have to try this (takes another bite and lays it on Luke’s plate).

LUKE: (Looks at it) What is it?

LORELAI: Not sure, but I imagine food in heaven tastes like that. Try it!

LUKE: I am not going to eat an unknown.

LORELAI: (Pouts) No?

LUKE: Fine, I’ll eat it.

LORELAI: (Grins and pats him on his shoulder) That’s my baby.]

-Awesome...again...the exact amount of luke and lorelai sugary goodness...okay...that sounded less gross in my head...lol...and i love how Lorelai calls him baby...Okay...everybody...let's all say it in unison...LOUD AND PROUD..."AW"

9) Love how you make Chris uncomfortable when he sees Luke and Lorelai with the holding hands thing.

10)So...like i said before...at first i didn't understand why Chris got mad so fast...but...i guess he saw the Luke and Lorelai romanticky stuff...and it really hit him...so i now get why you wrote it that way...

11)Great how Lorelai tells Chris that her relationship with Luke is none of his biz...and Luke saying that he won't let Chris hurt them again...and Rory wanting Chris to leave...

12)[LORELAI: Yes (sighs) I asked you to dance.

LUKE: (Confused) Yes, you did.

LORELAI: (Frustrated) You totally missed what the bandleader said, huh?

LUKE: What did he say?

LORELAI: (Oblivious to his question) I love you.

LUKE: (Confused even more) He said that?

LORELAI: (Starts her rant) I was waiting for the perfect moment. And that’s why I wigged out about mom meeting you at the diner. I didn’t want her to ruin anything before I told you how I felt… how I’ve been feeling for a while now. And tonight… I…

LUKE: (Cuts her off) I love you, too.

Lorelai smiles, then touches his face as she leans in for a kiss. After a few seconds, they pull apart.

LORELAI: Well, I think that was a perfect moment.

LUKE: (Nods) Agreed. (Gives her a slightly long peck on the lips).

-Very cool...Love this!...and you did it for me, which makes it even better (if that's possible)...anyway...their exchange is very romantic...-and i love the suit comment she makes before he leaves...

13) Marilyn letting the cat outta the bag...i knew Emily was lying the whole time...WHORE

14) So...This mystery line that Lorelai says to her...i told you before and i'll tell ya again...what you wrote will be dead on, i think...and Emily deserves it...she really crossed the line this time...NO ONE MESSES WITH L/L...and NO ONE MESSES WITH LUKE!

So...That was very good...Please change your mind and write more...and thanks again for both shout-outs...the first...and the secret one...YOU ROCK!

-G
navgirl chapter 4 . 12/24/2004
Wow! That is SO how I envisioned it as I was reading the spoilers a couple of days ago! Now, how can you write that and then claim to not be a writer? In awe, thanx.
valerie chapter 4 . 12/23/2004
wow.. "writing's not my thing" are you kidding? you did a really good job of capturing the characters.. i loved it! great fic girl!
Fwoukje chapter 4 . 12/22/2004
I really liked the fic, good to see a speculative one...bummer though, the final lorelai line is definately not the one i hear her saying...but guess we'll find that out in januari right ?

;) good writing!
netherfield chapter 4 . 12/20/2004
Finally got a moment to read this fic! I enjoyed it so much. Interesting choice to go with script format too. I especially liked the 'plaid shirt' line, and your L&L and Lor&Rory exchanges. They rang so true! Really nice job of filling in the blanks for us. Thanks so much. Needed the cheer-up.

Hope you're wrong about that last line though! lol.
TMK78 chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Great story, Audi. I loved it.
Swttoothfan chapter 4 . 12/20/2004
That is some amazing writing there. Seriously. They should use this script for the 100th episode. I loved it. Everything was well-thought out and I have a feeling that the real episode is going to proceed along the lines of your script. Excellent Job!

shan
Natalia DeLuca chapter 4 . 12/19/2004
REALLY good! I loved how you dealed with the spoilers! And loved this end. I could actually here the "tan tan tan tan".
melliemoe chapter 4 . 12/19/2004
Nice ending. :D
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