|Reviews for Chasing the Forbidden|
| Calling Thunder chapter 22 . 11/14/2013
OMG! :D I feel so many things right now...I hate Lily right now (even though its her motherly intuition whatever )...I feel terrible they are apart and Dracos In jail! ...I can't wait for them to be reunited! :3 ooo and from earlier how Harry got detentions from daydreaming...oh my goodness I would have had soo many detentions O_o...LOVE this story!
| Allie Danger chapter 22 . 7/26/2013
Fuck! Where is the re encounter?
| White Rabbit chapter 22 . 7/26/2013
YOU BEAST OF A GIRL! This ending made me practically yell in aggravation! Sweet tap dancing Merlin on a surfboard, this was beautiful, and though this did upset me, and i did kind of call you a beast...ahem...anyhow, the end made me happy, it left a lot to be imagined, and i do like being left hanging, once in a while! This was lovely, i'm sad that i wasn't here sooner to see this. I'm such a slowpoke...sigh...
| KlaineDrarryMerthur chapter 22 . 4/17/2013
YOU'VE BROKEN IT
| Toomuchme chapter 22 . 1/16/2013
Clap clap clap.
Utterly amazing and heart-wrenching.
Teenage angst gained some points too.
| sectumsempra chapter 22 . 12/23/2012
Oh my Jesus. That was amazing, I don't know how I didn't read this before. I absolutely loved it, it touched my heart, and I will never see these situations the same way ever again. I like to think that Draco found Harry in America, and they ended up living together forever. But, maybe that's too happy. Or maybe Draco can't find Harry and Harry is never with anyone else until he dies, and he and Draco reunite in Heaven. Maybe Harry and Draco become so depressed that they become shells of themselves, and meet by coincidence when forced to leave their respective homes... Anyways, I absolutely loved it, besides a few grammatical mistakes. But, it's one of the best I've ever read, people should recommend this on tumblr. Just saying.
Happy Writing! Happy Holidays and a Happy New Year. ;)
-UnicornAuror27078 (that's my pottermore name, add me!) I'm a Slytherin :)
| jduke chapter 22 . 12/14/2012
it was fine until the end. that sucked!
| Harmonia Aurora chapter 22 . 10/23/2012
Just finished reading this in one go ;) It felt so real. I'm glad you share this. Thank you :)
| MimiTaylor chapter 22 . 10/18/2012
I was going to cry if there wasn't a sequel!
| Kashel chapter 22 . 6/10/2012
found your story through a translation, the german one!
I actually liked the basic idea and it was a nice read-through.
The only thing bothering me is the last three chapters.
It seems a bit rushed... probably you wanted to keep it that way :)
The end is also somewhat unsatisfying.
Will Harry still be there in fourteen months?
What if Lily once more moves away?
Well would have loved at least one scene of their later reunion.
But as I said - even if I raise some criticism - the story was good.
good luck with future projects
| SignatureSinful chapter 22 . 5/18/2012
This. Was. Epic.
Although my heart did kinda lurch when I read this. Things'll never be the same again for them.
LILY/GINNY WHY'S YOU'S SUCH A SKANK?
Ugh. Though I adore your James. And that's an achievement cause normally I abhore him.
The only thing that made me wonder was that I kinda thought they were in America all along. In Britain, we don't really play Basket ball and schools different in general. Also, I was under the impression that we don't have the statutory rape law here. As long as you're 16, it's fine. At the school my mother works at, the principle was found out having an affair with a 17 year old. He only lost his job. And he was 39!
So... the context of this would probably work better if the countries were swapped. Not that you'll change it around now. But whatever.
Thanks for the good read. You made me squee many a time when Draco was romancin' Harry ;)
| HanariaBlack chapter 22 . 5/5/2012
Oh, God. I can't stop crying! Why Draco and Harry can't have a little happiness? Why Draco ends up in a bloody jail? WHY CAN'T GINNY SHUT HER MOUTH, SO WE DON'T HAVE TO SOB OR CRY OR SAD? I hate her now. Really, your story influence me. Your fic is awesome―although you've made me crying, I think it always be awesome― and I admire the characters. You can make me crying about Draco and Harry, and you can make wanna strangle Ginny to death. Sorry, but I kind of dislike your ending. It never let us know what will be the ending surely is. :(
But it's okay, because the promise that Draco has made. :')
Oh God, I love you. Really I do. D
I wanna hug u so much,
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 22 . 3/20/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Oh such a heart-breaking chapter/story ;( i truly loved it! 3
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 21 . 3/20/2012
Oh bloody hell but still fourteen months -it could have been worse
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 20 . 3/20/2012
this was such a sombre chapter save for the revenge on ginny and the way james tried to dissuade lily from moving