Reviews for The curse of the dark lord
Empress Yugi chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
If you are still interested in my opinion. After reading over both versions for the third time I'll have to be honest and say that the newer version has a better written decription of what is going on and less confusing and drawn out than the original.
Empress Yugi chapter 3 . 12/16/2008
I would prefer either version of this wonderful tale as long as you do continue it.
yo chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
kiokie-princess-of-pain chapter 2 . 10/24/2005
i loved your story woho write more soon.
isis-reincarnation chapter 18 . 3/14/2005
all right, asil! you're talent once again shines throught with this chapter. more more more!
A Really Big Idiot 24 chapter 18 . 2/27/2005
Nice...but reading at 3:17 am isn't good for coffee...

Update soon.
isis-reincarnation chapter 17 . 2/12/2005
Wahoo! A new chapter that attests to your incredible knack for writing, Asil!
Amethyst no Megami chapter 17 . 2/11/2005
WAH! Love love love this! What's gonna happen next? Please continue! Hhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhu! I was banned from computer for a week! A WEEK! Well, ciao!
isis-reincarnation chapter 16 . 2/8/2005
whoa! easy there, killer. That lil erotic blood-sucking session between Marron and Mille was a bit, um, interesting. It really bothered me that the sorcerer hunters (and even BigMama) just brushed off the incident, saying, "oh yes, this is what happened before." They're pretty naive... I hope a wake up call is in store!

Another awesome addition, though!
A Really Big Idiot 24 chapter 16 . 2/7/2005
Hm...I not a big fan on Mille/Marron pairings...but it was nice.

Update soon!
A Really Big Idiot 24 chapter 15 . 2/4/2005
Great story! Please Update soon! I loved it.
isis-reincarnation chapter 15 . 1/31/2005
hehe "57 bottles of blood on the wall" ! You sure make me laugh sometimes. it's good to have humor in these kinds of stories. :) And also, HOW THE FREAK IS MICHEL SPURTING OUT LIGHTNING BOLTS! Oh, and Asil, watch the little grammer things that I'm really picky about (just spelling, commas, periods, etc.). Like no 'patients' should be 'patience,' and '?' instead of '.' on questions. :) no worries, though. Maybe I could be your editor someday. Now I wanna know if that's the end of Carmela, and the start of a blossoming relationship for Mille and Marron! oh dear
isis-reincarnation chapter 14 . 1/31/2005
Ah! Another brilliant addition! I love how you've begun to weave together all the character groups. It's also cool how Marron is a blood-lusting, insensitive halfling, but that Luca is kinda his teacher now. And I also LOVE Ariel's use of Latin in her chant :). Hm Mille and Marron... how nice. Can't wait for more! Are you going to have Marron and Carmela get married and create an empire of evil vampires? hehe Or what about if Luca and Michel uh got together? hm
Amethyst no Megami chapter 14 . 1/29/2005
WAI! Continue continue! Love Marron! Love your work! Love eveything! Don't stop without finishing!
A Really Big Idiot 24 chapter 14 . 1/24/2005

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