Reviews for The Iron Butterfly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Youbdonsuch a good job ofbcapturing each character’s dialogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and everything tied up, no spelling or grammar errors, it was a pleasure to read your story. |
![]() ![]() Great story ! |
![]() ![]() Great motivation for the villain! I think you came up with an interesting case! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why not take in the sister? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like a lot of people screwed up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done, Tony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tony will come through! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for Tony! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for Ducky! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well now you know the reason why the Iron Butterfly was chosen as the symbol for their movement. Should have heard Ducky out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually the evidence should have been collected at the scene. But life saving measures come first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually none of them should be investigating this crime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for Ducky! They have a crime scene to investigate. |