Reviews for A Drift in the Deep
ViolettBlack chapter 12 . 5/24/2014
This is one of the best Dark Angel fanfictions I have ever read! Why did you stop writing fanfictions? I like your writing style! Please come back !
MoveForward chapter 12 . 1/9/2010
does it have to end...great story..
phalangesbyfive chapter 12 . 11/28/2009
Aw man, I wish this weren't the end. You did a fabulous job.
Marcus Sylenus chapter 12 . 9/11/2009
Sorry for the delay in reading & reviewing, especially after nagging you about finishing your stories... :/

This was short, perhaps too short, but it's just a perfect S1 moment, and it's a fitting ending for a wonderful story.

Now if you could do something about "I'm Always Ready"...
Mari83 chapter 12 . 8/26/2009
Sad to see it end but good it’s like this with the special feeling of their diving trip lingering…
latenightrain chapter 12 . 8/18/2009
I realize I'm a bit late in the reviewing since I read this story for the first time (literally) years after it was begun. Thanks so much for coming back to it these last couple of months. I was late jumping on the DA/ML bandwagon, but your stories are among my favorites. The shippery moments tie in so seamlessly with the action and the plot is tight. The voice of the story always comes out best when one writes about a familiar subject and you clearly know diving. My favorite chapters are the ones where they are training in the pool and when they are chasing down the bad guys at sea. I hope you keep writing more. I've never experienced the 100 reviews of DA's heyday, but I still appreciate our little ML universe for it's well-written and compelling stories.
jfg207 chapter 12 . 8/17/2009
Like I asked before, is there going to be another story where the three or two go diving in the deep? Their emotions magnify in the seas without them now it and Bling see it...

I haven't been near an ocean at all, could you describe more amazing life under the sea? I know you being a diver and all you have wonderful sites you could describe... ;-)
nattylovesu chapter 11 . 6/12/2009
hey

I love the imagery of scuba driving which you do so well...I really hope this is not the end of this adventure...this story gels very well with the theme that is clearly close to your own experiences..

chers and well done
intstebri chapter 11 . 3/30/2007
Is this over? Why the "?" after TBC? You should finish it, please!

I really enjoyed it, the caracters of each of them was so right! I guess you just reached me with Logan-Max-Bling interaction (I do love them, and always think Bling should be there to help them to hook up!)

I hope you will continue this!

Thank you!
Mari83 chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This is such a great story, I’ve just started to read it again (not for the first time;-). An intriguing Eyes Only case, excellent UST and topping it an unusual setting and all that cool info about scuba diving (which I always wanted to do as a kid – now I think it would make me claustrophobic). And it's not complete yet, right (I hope)...?
jfg207 chapter 11 . 1/19/2007
Great! Your explaination of the deep is great! Can you go futher with this story to include more adventures for Logan and Max in diving and other things.

Jeanette
jfg207 chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
Oh man! It was just getting interesting...

Does Logan's get to dive or what?

How did Logan face look like when he saw Max in her bikini?

How would Bling teach Logan about diving with him in a wheelchair?

These are some of the questions I'd like answered, please.

Jeanette
Kasman chapter 11 . 5/16/2006
It'll be a shame to go back to something more humdrum after this lovely peaceful day. Your beta is looking forward to more...
Babyangel86 chapter 11 . 4/23/2006
cool... update soon...

excellent stuff... really like this story and the silent interplay between max and Logan... with Bling sort of just taking it all in...
BlueAngel137 chapter 11 . 4/20/2006
Another excellent chapter ... I liked the atmosphere you created and the way you connect your own experiences with the story. Nice job.

Loved this lines:

-...So mysterious and compelling, drawing me in, ready to swallow and consume my very being. The image of Max’s face appeared in his mind and stayed there, seeming to float just beyond his reach in the dark depths. ... (beautiful!)

-...That’s something Manticore sure woulda liked to put in us…lose an arm grow a new one. ...

The part about the Octopus was absolutely beautiful too.

Thanks ... definitely looking forward to your next chap (hope the TBC? wasn't meant as a question)!
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