Reviews for The Way to Freedom
Regan chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
Needs to be updated! What happens next!
Jack chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
It's great! Keep up the good work :)
WraithLoverQueen chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
This is really cute and sweet.
. There's not enough Rodimus love on the internet... Everyone's always a jerk to poor Roddy...
Good job giving him some love!
Hope there's more to come.
Queen of the Decepticons chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Very good. Please update soon!
goergie carter chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
come on!1 you have to finish this story its awsome! please please please. i read this in one go it would be like the crime of the century not to finish this story. i like romance.
Hope and love chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
i love it!
sam chapter 3 . 7/23/2007
AH... this is a good story i cant belive you havent written the next chapter from last year. i love this story please please please write the next chapter this story rocks! keep up the good work.

starscream girl chapter 3 . 2/19/2007
that was awesome and roddy and star make a good couple, please make more.

starscream girl out...
Jadej.j chapter 3 . 1/20/2007
Very nice story so far :D
Draconic Caduceus chapter 3 . 9/14/2006

It's aweshome. Keep up the good work!


Storm Blue Lightning Saix chapter 2 . 6/22/2006
what's her name what's her name tell me!
Coffee and Twinkies chapter 3 . 3/26/2006 time well this is the first time I've done this style of a review...Pro and Con

lets start with the Cons...

Well the first two chapters were just fine in grammar wise...and then the third seemed all rushed...and it was all in one clump...I don't that your mother will not let you go to this uber cool site at home (prolly cuz it got in the way of school a mothers view am I right?)


I really like the story line...and again I really like how you took your time with the first two...and I have a huge hunch that Starfire will get captured by Galvatron (very much used to hearing Megatron though) and will find out that she has a name...

what to do with the cons

well you can alway type out all of your stories at home...I doubt she complains much about you TYPING...and whatever you have a typed up chappy that is completed and edited...from bad grammar and it to a data disc or usb gigabyte holder thing and take it to school and load it up on the compys there...

Also whatever documents you have uploaded onto your fanfic account you can edit...*looks at profile* ah the computer crashed? unless thats old news...

and I didn't see there was a prequal...interesting...though still three chappehs...unless they were really LONG chappehs...

and this would be my second biggest bitch...(since I've recently been watching G1...I haven't seen G2 or Armada...)...

DO NOT RUSH! Take time for for the feelings to develope...between Starfire and Rodimus..(wasn't he Hot Rod?)...and stuff like that...

But the choice of listening to this advice or ignoring it is your choice...and if you wish to contact me...take a look at my pro and send me an email or private message and I will get them...

wow this is probably the longest review I've ever given anyone...and like anyone who really likes this fic...UPDATE!
ShadowDrygan04 chapter 3 . 12/12/2005
yay the chapter is finally here yay it's good that starfire and rodimus are together i can't wait for the next chapter please write it soon please
ShadowDrygan04 chapter 2 . 10/9/2005
hey this is really good i can't wait for the next chapter please write it very soon
starscreamlover chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
u must keep going this is good. there a few spelling and grammer mistakes here and there but other than that keep up the good work! )
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