Reviews for Vertigo
hkeren40 chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Awe very very cute! Nice fic
Random Reader chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
That was... Primus, that was amazing.

I love how you wrote these two. You kept them so ic... It was amazing, and dramatic, and suspenceful, not to mention tragic...

I can't add more to this otherwise I'll merely be repeating what others have said XD

I love how you described Megatron's madness in the beginning. And the way you wrote him... It's like you can feel it there in the background, see it out of the corner of your eye, always raging and bubbling like a volcano waiting for the right moment to burst... Does that make any sense? XD

You so rarely find good Armada fics out there, let alone Megatron/Starscream ones. I congratulate you on the writing of this masterpiece!

Also LOL at "leaving a guppy in charge of a barrel of neurotic piranhas" and Starscream slapping Megatron. Anyone else have a Pirates of the Carribean moment? cx
Bibliotecaria.D chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
"Sacrificed" caught Starscream's abandonment by Megatron through his fractured thoughts at the moment; this fic reasons its way through Megatron's reluctant thought processes about the same.
blue.bimbomushi chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Really glad I came across this fic. Very well-written and the characters are very well done. Great work!
Kali chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
How beautiful and...sad. (And lovely and haunting and a million other positive adjectives). This fic took my breath away, and I don't even *like* this pairing most of the time. Good Armada fics are so hard to come by, and this one really shines. You got the characterization down perfectly; I can only hope that my imagery-writing skills will be as refined as yours someday. Your description of Megs' insanity at the beginning stood out as particularly awesome.

Also, I really admire the way you insert little bits of humor into the most intensely emotional scenes without ruining the overall tone. That takes talent.

"The crickets that inhabited the field went right on chirping because nothing in the world disturbs a cricket" possibly one of the most random-yet-amusing pieces of authorial commentary ever.

There are plenty of other things I could gush over, so I'll spare you the excess fangirling by summing it all up in a word: BRAVO. :)
cai-ann chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
amazing loced it suited them so well
MadroxMR chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Lol, so the 'reason' was so-called "biological research" on a buttercup? How easily Megatron's logic processors succumb to the fine art of rationalization.

It was a great story, full of interesting characterization. You have a great writing style that just flows. And I thoroughly enjoyed following Megatron's thought processes throughout. Very interesting and well done!
Amanda Saitou chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Your story is really great, you've done a great job being subtle about Megatron and Starscream relationship, since yeah, I do believe that it's a relationship. Great work really!
Atalan chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I really, really like the imagery in this - I love Starscream dropping Megatron, it's amazing, a very powerful sequence. I also like the light touch you've used for what's between them - no falling into each other's arms weeping, thank goodness.

And I love, for some reason I don't know, "Wretched, lying, hateful little traitor. How I’ve missed you. How I’ve missed you."
Systemscrash chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
It really MUST be my goal to comment on all of your fics today, once again I love it.

The characterizations are wonderful, very good!
Crimson Quincy chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
You know, to make a person who does not like slash like a story- with slash IN IT- is hard.

I congratulate you XD

You not only had me laughing my ass off, but it was suspenseful and VERY well written. Also surprisingly true to their character... which is hard to manage in any kind of romance with, you know, evil people. o_O

You know, you've got me wanting to draw Megatron's simple joy of ravaging that field and destroying those buttercups in the funniest way possible.

Maybe I'll get around to it sometime XD
Magnusrae chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
You have a marvelous way with words. Usually when I read a story, a phrase or two stands out, but with this one there were so many neat and unique ways of word organization that I can't remember just one or two. It was quite simply an awesome story, and I didn't even really enjoy 'Armada' that much. Thanks for the great read!
AzureOcelot chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Whoa. Wow. That was... inTENSE. I'm not usually much of an Armada fan - though Armada Screamer is certainly cute in his own sad, bitter, conflicted way - but this was so well-written it actually made me tingle, and I had to save it. And applaud you. Bravo!
Storm Blue Lightning Saix chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
nice story very detailed but did you have to make megatron gay?
MAJANNA chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
*I will say something more when I will regain my voice again*
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