|Reviews for One Winged Angel|
| JJ Inugami chapter 36 . 8/23
That was a great story! I love the way everything played out, so to speak. I find their telepathic communication highly amusing, since half the time they seemed to use it to tease each other. Anyways, this was beautiful and I enjoyed it. I think it was wrapped up nicely, with the ending to being vague or anything like that. I am curious about Dobby and Crest and was hoping some baby house elves would make an appearance, but oh well. Can't have everything. X3
| GreenDrkness chapter 36 . 5/2
I love this story it just makes me think and I lobe how you wrote out the love happening and not have fall in love straight off
Keep on the writes
| quztuk chapter 36 . 3/24
I liked it.
Not a particularly explosive story, steady and competent.
A good, calm read.
| Abbey Whitlock chapter 36 . 2/27
i liked this a lot. Great plot.
| InArduisFidelius chapter 36 . 11/4/2014
Brilliant. Nothing else needs to be said :)
| LurkerAlert chapter 36 . 10/23/2014
Love love love this story - so worth the re-read. 3
| passanger chapter 36 . 9/2/2014
I rather liked this story and am surprised it isn't more popular (I blame the minimalist summary). The plot was interesting and not too predictable (I liked that they changed their plans often - it made things more realistic). Character development was good, though the way Voldemort turned from an insane sadist into a not-so-bad Tom was a bit too abrupt and could use more explanation. The writing looks very professional both in style and flow - I don't remember catching even one obvious grammar or logic error. The story itself is not very canonish (as far as the last books are concerned) but it is original and not too outlandish. Though there is something missing that would make it truly exceptional - maybe it lacks emotional engagement? Somehow our main heroes went through their adventure without committing serious mistakes, taking big risks or having their important plans go to hell. In short, I don't think they suffered enough or had the opportunity to demonstrate their best qualities while faced with opposition, and so, the victory seems too easy.
I would have liked to read a more detailed epilogue. What happened to Blaise, Remus, Severus and the others? What did Tom and Harry do with their freedom? Did the Slytherin house recover their good name? What were the reactions from the public? What were the reactions to the new will? ect...
All in all, a good and enjoyable story. Thank you.
| lunaatje123 chapter 36 . 8/30/2014
Thank you for the story! Interesting angle and nice execution. Now I'm going to crash into my bed, because I really should have payed better attention to the time, my only defense is that your writing completely pulled me in and made it hard to stop before the end XD
| Lavonya chapter 36 . 6/22/2014
I absolutely /LOVE/ this!
It's an interesting funny intriguing and creative story!
Thanks for the explanation, I really appreciate it!
| Lavonya chapter 35 . 6/22/2014
Pathetic duel really...
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| Lavonya chapter 32 . 6/22/2014
Interesting, I like the way you wrote this!
| Lavonya chapter 31 . 6/22/2014
Stupid bitch... I really dislike her right now
| Lavonya chapter 30 . 6/22/2014
HAAAAAHAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAA... Nice prank!
| Lavonya chapter 29 . 6/22/2014
Heeeheeeeeheeeeeheeeeeheeeeeheeeeeheeeeee... I like this a lot!