Reviews for Break
Elficiel chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
I love how Atem and his red-violet eyes are portrayed here as an anchor to Anzu, something who gives her a sense of belonging, a sense of peace and completion. Which makes me think her action wasn't just out of love and romantic feelings; there's something more spiritual to it.

She decides her place is in afterlife, an ethereal place filled with spirits from another era. Spirits she seems to feel more connected with than with those of the modern world - I love how the line 'eight shadows waited for them' reflected that.

Fascinating story!
TheRealContestshippingPrincess chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Wow this was good I like it :) the way you wrote it was so simple yet elegant and powerful :) I really liked it sort of bittersweet in a way disconnected yet attached. I'm rambling but im faving it :)
Crissytje chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Oh yeah Atemu is the sexiest of all three good choice:p
Felling chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Heh; I actually really liked that. Good-job. :)
VampiressBeauty20 chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
bitter sweet
dreamcloud516 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005


that was good. i liked it! _

animeaddict99 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
so sas...(cries) nice job.
Autumn Dusk chapter 1 . 2/13/2005

I am absolutely speechless. That was *amazing*. Okay, so not SO speechless but...

Goodness, you're such a great writer! I envy you! :)
MikariStar chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
I don't like Revolutionshipping but I liked this fanfic, how everything was described and the ending. It was kind of a bitter sweet ending yet I can't help but to think that regardless of what happen it was more on the happy side in the end. Nice story. :)
Mamono chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
Hmm, to be honest, I wasn't planning on reading this. ; I just don't really like Atemu, but alas, a writing from Az just can't be ignored. Seriously.

When I did read it- one, it surprised the heck out of me. ; Am I only one who was ilke: "o.o Jeez, she killed herself for him." And I'm not even going to say anything in reference to DSF's comment about something stopping her- don't want to be the instigator of any more silly art for serious stories. (I like that title. SASS- yes. *smirk*)

Though it was really awesome- short sweet and oh-so complete. You don't need to add anything to it. And I oh-so-love Anzu's last words. Somehow I knew you'd stick *something* in there. Not sure what to call that something, but it just makes me smirk. And so, the lesson is never pass something up because of how it looks at first.
Starian Princess chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
That was a very nicely but short as we say it Revolutionshipping? I'd like to know why you call it that though. I myself am a big fan of the Azureshipper and the Faultshippng. Are you by any chance a Bakura/Anzu and Malik/Anzu fan as well? I simply love Anzu's character that's all, the way she can end up with anyone. Hmm.. where can you find good Persevereshipping? I haven't actually come across any yet and I'd love to read one.
Inu Kaiba chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
. Aw, that's... so sad ;.; Poor Yugi...
DarkShadowFlame chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Do you know how ecstatic I am that this was a happy ending? It's happy in my book, anyway. I was petrified that Anzu's courageous leap after Atemu would be halted in some way, and she'd be sent brokenhearted back to her friends... Speaking of which, I know they'll miss her, but even that bittersweetness isn't enough to counteract the pure, wonderful fluff! God, your last line sent shivers up my spine. This was an amazingly beautiful piece of fanfiction.
abandonedineverysenseoftheword chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Hmm... Interesting... Never seen -this- type of YYxA fic before...
Doma the Angel of Silence chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
'lo Azurite!

I have to admit, it was refreshing to read an Anzu/Atemu fic for once. I love the way you include thoughts in the text beause it makes it very clear what the character is feeling. It's a hard measure to get right because too much can get explained at once, and dull the story. But because of the skilled way you write it that doesn't happen in your fics.

I'm off to r&r WDKY now, very excited about that!

I was wondering, as it's the silly season and all, d'you reckon you could give your loyal reviewers a Christmas treat and post a YGO Christmas fanfic? I am aware that Christmas isn't a major holiday in japan, so it may be difficult, but you would make my holiday if you did!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!


Doma the Angel of Silence
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