good story, i like this pairing

a little slow but i guess that makes it more realistic

you did good with carver speech

good one,

like those guys together.

Nice I love the fic!good job

Great chapters again. I didn't really notice the changes, maybe I have forgotten the original paragraphs. But it was absolutely well-written and great! Can't wait to read more! Keep up the fantastic work!

I read the first chapter again and I have to remark, I don't really like the longer version of Tino's dream. I think it's a *little* too long, but mysterious and pretty powerful, though. But I thought his dream in the first version of The Feeling was just perfect. Anyway, really well-written. Keep up the great work!

I really really love the way Tino & Lor get together! So much emotion, and the way you describe it, just perfect! I remember when I read The Feeling for the first time, I was so amazed. I loved this scene that much that I drew some pictures, you know, like a little comic.

Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the great work!

I finally found some time to start reading your redo of The Feeling. I was pretty surprised that you want to rewrite it in the first place, esp. about the fact that you dislike it. But I really can't wait to see what you have planned, esp. for the last few chapters. I didn't really like the sad ending, but the happy ending is not my fave, either. So let's hope we'll all be content with it in the end.

I really liked Tino's line in the very beginning of this chapter: "Nothing's worse than waking from the pleasant bliss of a dream to come back into the harsh drudgery of reality" - how true! *sigh*

Thats very good,but i cant understand all...*mad*

But its very short i belive...

And i belive too thats a very compact story from the the peoples the first story kenthnt,they cant understand the second story...

Aw, don't worry 'bout the deadline or nuttin' I'm just glad that you've been updating n' everything. Dun' stress too much about getting stuff done n' stuff... just as long as you eventually update... I mean, hey! I didn't update my FictionPress story for 'bout a year until now .

Bwah! Anyway, enough of my rambling. I'm so glad there's going to be more chapters! I was worried that chapter 5 was going to be the last one... I suppose all of my ramblings are stupid because I haven't read the pre written version of the fic... but... er... yeah... anyway... just lost my train of thought... um... Looking forward to more chapters! The scene with Tino and Lor was too sweet for words I really liked it; you defiantly have a way with words!

Roren

Hoo, bet you're sick of me now... hem! Anywho!

Again, aw, poor Tino... this fic makes you just wanna'... I dunno'... do something nice for him... I can't wait to read the next chapter I love the way one can get so wrapped up in this fic... just like a Robin Hobb book... or one of Terry Pratchett's or something...

I really, really liked the way Lor was upset after her date instead of being all bubbly, as I had been expecting; it really kept my attention and made me want to read more anything... cracking good work, old bean!

Roren

Aw, poor Tino... I can't wait to see what happens after Lor's date with Thompson n' everything I love this fic so much! I'll defiantly have to go and read more of your fics; your writing style is excellent, in character and... er... excellent! I can't express how well in character everyone is. It's like watching TV in my head... everyone's actions are so natural compared to the ones on TV n' everything. Waah! I gotta' go read more!

Roren

Woo, hey, it's me again... hope you don't mind more of my babbling reviews n' stuff... n'... stuff... This fic is SO good and I thought it deserved far more than 1 review

Again, I really like this fic. You definatly have everyone in their characters... well, in my opinion. I can't wait to read more... in fact, I'll do that now!

Roren

Wow! It's rare to see weekender fics up... either that or I'm just not good at finding them... I haven't read 'The Feeling' as you mentioned somewhere... but I -do- love the way this fic is going! You have everyone in perfect character for this scenario n' everything. I really like the way you pulled off Tino's paranoid personality and... Ah! It's just so cool! I'm going to stop before I blow-up from writing too much or something...

Roren

YES! more weekender action kept it coming