Reviews for Little Sister: Cliff's Poem
teacupz chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I liked the repeatance of the first and third line. it sounded like echo and gave a lot of great effects into the story.

most of all, it's unique! you discovered new styles on poetry but didn't completely throw all of basic things, like the poetical words. they were amusing! :D I think, you had also captured all Cliff's depressions here. great job and wish to see more from you.
xXdarkblossomXx chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Very good poem. I really like it and I hope you write more poems.
Krazie4Christ chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
That was awesome! Makes me jealous. You're just too good at poetry, Zinovia. Keep writing!
DrippingInk chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Why, how cute! I love your poems! They're so touching, and this one was no exception! Very good job! Please keep writing!
Tragedy Catalyst chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
that's really cool but i think it sounds better without the first two being repeated. like it should only say it once then the first one again at the end. yeah...that's just my thoughts. It's an awesome poem. as my friend would say "Wowow that's passionate" _
PacificTwist chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Very nice poem, very touching and rhymes well. Please continue writing and I shall continue to read!