Reviews for Doomed
GateSeeker2 chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Interesting...a bit random and hurried...but that would indeed be Sam's state of mind after "100 days" - I enjoyed it, but it did unsettle me about how confused and frustrated Sam was - not too mention how she seemed to berate herself for her feelings. Now, I'm off to read the other story. :-)
Bucky4 chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Very nice piece indeed. Very evocative.
SG1-Fanfic chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Wonderfully written!
Miran Anders chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Wow, this is a great first effort in English and S/J! I enjoyed it very much. Sam's inner dialogues are quite true to her character... and if you're serious about wanting a beta reader/editor type, I'd love to help. I'm a grown-up (ha!) who got my degree in English. You can check out my writing style here on the site, as "Miran Anders", and see if you think we're compatable. Keep up the great work! Thanks- Miran