Reviews for New Guy at the Hive
Moonlight-is-Innocence chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Aw! That was really good and should be more fics like this and not just one-shots either. You would probably be really good at writing them I hope you consider this; I would gladly R&R.

iolah chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
o its really really good!

my story is pathetic compared to this. can you write one from cybogs pov?
Lucifina BloodRavyn chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
I LOVED IT! it was so awesome...other than Raven Jinx is my fave as well...very cool!
ntmnky chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
I really like this. It's a nice change from all the Cyborg/Jynx stories where Jynx comes to the good side, or they get together regardless of thier differences.

The flow in this story feels like a journal entry where Jynx is recapping what happened. However, I think I would like to see more about her feelings... It reads as though she's distanced herself from what happened in order to save herself some pain, and I don't really think that's in character for her. I always felt she would be more emotionally attached to events.