Reviews for Afraid
Miniman34000 chapter 3 . 5/19
This is an amazing story
DBZGT34589 101 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Nice start!
Your grammar was pretty awesome
Tk chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Awesome! Good Job
jj chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
Please. Continue the story. If you don't i'll call the cops...jk... but seriously. CONTINUE!
jj chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
XD So loving and coraging 2 each other. Good job. :D
LianaDare8 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I love it! I'm gonna write me own Videl and Gihon. Story so I need experience first!
LianaDare8 chapter 3 . 4/20/2011
Chapter 4! Chapter 4!
LianaDare8 chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
Love it!
LianaDare8 chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
Love it!
LianaDare8 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I love it! I'm gonna write me own Videl and Gihon. Story so I need experience first!
UltimateGohan42 chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
hahaha too bad you didnt put in a hercule chapter where they tell him what happened...lol i can just imagine his face
Videl161 chapter 3 . 12/15/2005
Good chapter! Very nerve racking though, waiting to see what Chichi was going to say.
Twinnie chapter 2 . 8/17/2005
The story is enjoyable.

The review blackmail is despicable.

Aren't you supposed to write because you enjoy writing and have a story to tell?
l Dark Storm l chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
interesting, I like it so far...perhaps you could lengthen the chapters slightly but besides that it's pretty good. Keep up the nice work.

l Dark Storm l
peachchanvidel chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
I want the next chapter.. and it could be a longer one, too!

*add story to fav*
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