Reviews for A Motion Too Far
erching chapter 12 . 2/2/2013
shame you seem to have dropped this story it was going quite nicely
Kisaa chapter 12 . 11/4/2012
This story is very interesting!Never heard anything like it..keep up the good work! :)
bookworm chapter 12 . 8/18/2012
Cool. I liked this fic,it was...cute? Anyway,hope you have more like this! Well,ciao!
Iceheart15 chapter 12 . 4/23/2011
I just love this story and the plot!
Mmyself29 chapter 12 . 2/24/2011
beautiful story
Kenjo chapter 12 . 8/23/2010
You really write good fanfics.:) I hope you'll update it soon!
V chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Terrible summary.
smexyforever chapter 12 . 7/24/2009
like it very much!
kyuubi shadow chapter 12 . 5/9/2009
Very nice
The Darkest wizard chapter 12 . 5/8/2009
This is a great story! Please update soon!I hope Kisame and the other Akatsuji join the the village Hidden in the Mist.
Patsuki21 chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
i love the new techniques you came up with they are really original and well thought out in power
Muria chapter 12 . 3/10/2008
Interesting. You're collecting an unusual group of shinobi, but that just makes it original...

I'm hoping to read more!
Kaz Obsidian chapter 12 . 3/7/2008
Hello, not really a review, just an interesting factoid. Ignoring hours and/or minutes you are exactly 4 years older than me.
Ninja-Steve-Master-Of-Shadows chapter 12 . 2/25/2008
So god damn great, you HAVE to put a few more chapters up soon (Y)
Ninja-Steve-Master-Of-Shadows chapter 4 . 2/24/2008
Great fic D I have to ask... it says that Haku Naruto and Kimi joining the Akatsuki has been done too many times... can you name some good Akastuki fics for me? - Steve
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