Reviews for The Persistence of Memory
Michelle chapter 3 . 6/18/2005
I REALLY like your style of 't get me wrong, I like 's one of my favorite characters(It's so hard to find other people who actually think she's cool), but she's being MEAN to you.I guess you did get your payback though.I did try to find out what the deal with the title was, but I have no idea!*grumble*I hope you will reviel the answer when you do your next !
Sifauna Auria chapter 3 . 3/7/2005
*huggles you back* All my friends hate Kikyo, and they like Sesshomaru..._ I'm happy I found an author that likes Kikyo. I read 2 other good Kikyo fics if you're interested in reading them.

(I'm in gr 10 too, I'll be soo pleased if I could write like you.

Anyways...enough of that pointless ramble. I can't wait to read your next chappie, I wonder what will happen...you left off at such a cliff-hanger...sniff...

Does Kagome go off and find Inuyasha and sees him with Kikyo? or...does Kikyo try and kill Inuyasha...or...i don't know...i just hope it's not too cliche... because every time Inuyasha and Kikyo meet, Kagome sees them...cries...and runs away... but your story so far is really creative, especially your descriptions...and I just want to read your next chappie...
itoshii-kikyou chapter 3 . 3/6/2005
This is a beautiful story. You can tell that you take Creative Writing (as someone who has also taken it) and you read a lot of poetry. Please update soon, my undying thirst for pure literature will lead me to quick death without the cool, quenching liquid of your story to revive me!
Sifauna Auria chapter 2 . 3/4/2005
This is really good. I like your history comparison of couples. The Oberon and Titania, Romeo and Juliet that turned into Kikyo and Inuyasha. But, were Josephine and Napoleon oppressed lovers like the otheres were?

Anyways, the thing rustling in the underbush is Kikyo isn't it?

Your descriptions are beautiful, where did you learn to write so sophisticatedly?
Hikari chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Ah...this is such a beautiful story. I LOVE your descriptions...they're soo wonderfully beatiful... and you used soo much metaphors, similes, and personifications... You're a very good English user/student..hehe...what grade are you in?

She stopped to gaze up at those crystalline stars, scattered fragments of silver dreams in the never-ending eternity of the night sky.

..hmm..this phrase is WONDERFUL...buy maybe instead of the comma, you should use a semi-colon...

I truly enjoyed reading this chapter...and I hope that you will update soon...
Sifauna Auria chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
You're right...Kikyo has never been a popular character and I doubt she ever will be...and many people tend to just view her as a barrier between Inuyasha and Kagome...I don't like that...because if it weren't for Kikyo...Kagome wouldn't be reincarnated as a miko with the shikon jewel...why can't people understand that?

So anyways...I really enjoyed reading your story because it doesn't bash Kikyo or make her sound so evil, like she doesn't deserve to live...I'm really glad that at least there are a few people out there who care about Kikyo. So...I really hope you write other Kikyo fanfics because your writing and writing style is very beautiful and I just like reading your story.