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margarita chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
o,that was great... screw the whole: 'satanic witch’ and ‘vengeful little twerp’, they don't know it's called talent!

That was amazing, it was so in character, i'd love so see more, maybe someone elses point of view? either way i'd love to read more it.

congrats, it was great!
Veleda chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Ooh, creepy. (I mean that as a compliment.) The voice of Muraki's most brutal side was an original touch, and I like how it worked.

The part where Muraki is next to Hisoka smoking might be the most disturbing part of the whole story, because it shows just how casual Muraki considers it.

I'm also really fond of the part where Tsuzuki is brought up. Muraki's fixation with the ywo of them is very well done.

The last two lines were a perfect ending. Gave me chills.
Arin Rowan chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
very dark and angsty. However, it is quite well written and haunting- I like your style. Evocative and aching...something about it pulls at you. A very good job that perfectly captured the attitude you were trying to produce.
DarkSapphireDragon chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
How dark. You wrote it beautifully. I like it! Please write more soon! -