|Reviews for Guilt|
| Aureleis chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
So pretty. I can just see the gloomy castle, with the bright little candle flickering in the window, and random flower petals lying about. Also love the phrasing and layout. Great job.
| Firefly4000 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Wonderful ficlet I love Marishka's chara and only wished there had been more to this one please continue:)
| manystorywriter chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Wonderful poem! I wish Marishka had more screen time in the movie. She seemed to be a very interesting character.
| mustang-grl chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Lovely, lovely poem. Much like it says, it has so much meaning and yet so little. From what I can remember, I have no reviewed on any of your work before, and you must forgive me for that. Being someone that has praised me with such reviews toward my story, I should have taken the time to look at your own writings earlier. Again, I apologize. Before I go, I should add that I have updated my Van Helsing fiction and am anxiously awaiting another beautiful review from you. So, again, you're poem is touching and thoughtful and divine.
| Nikoru Sanzo chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
I rarely come across good stuff on Dracula and his Brides (Carl Fan... guilty as charged), but when SilverFlover mentioned you, I wanted to check out your stories. _
Nice imagery on the first three lines. Does it speak of a parallelism between the candle, human life, and its divergence from Marishka's immortality?
Then He drew her attention back to herself, and she grinned.
I liked that one. Very In-Character for Dracula. D
But wasn’t that why she looked at that candle and felt so sad?
Ironic, indeed! D
| Nyssa Damaskinos chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
I loved the poem! I'm not really a poet or a writer of poetry, (though my favorite poet is Thomas Chatterton, I know you probably don't know him, but I love his work!) but, I must say it was very well written and deep.
Marishka is my favorite, so I'm always happy to read stuff about her! There is so little out there! Anyway, hopefully I can get to reading what you have about Verona, and Aleera!
| SapphireShadows chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
It captures a lot of emotion from the character, agin it's very well written.
| Left-the-building chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
This is really different . . . I guess she's just contemplating on what she's done and what she use to have before she became Dracula's bride? Lol, I'm a little confused obviously. But I liked this, it was clever, and it makes you think I guess, because it's not straight forward. You're not exactly sure what it's about, but you think you might have an idea. And yeah, I'm just rambling, lol, I'll shut up now.
| LadyValerious chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
Again, great! Descriptive and thought-provoking. I like your poetry almost as much as your stories...
| Sexy-Angel16 chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
great poetry! i really liked it! i am a REALLY big fan of Van Helsing! I'm starting a new fic on him, maybe you could check it out. l8r!
| Ebon Flow chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Another good Story.