Reviews for What if
marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
Its like like its a wonderful life in reverse harry potter style
InactiveImagination chapter 14 . 5/14/2014
You have such a wonderful way with words! You had managed to invoke deep emotions with a (semi) short story. I like the flow of it and it doesn't hurt that the plot is original (not overused). but it isn't too complex either. Simple pero maganda (: I love your writing. Spelling and grammatical errors are very minimal.

I hope you are alive and well! You haven't updated the sequel for awhile... I hope you pick up your inspiration, motivation , or whatever, to update.

Thank you for your time. I thoroughly enjoyed this..even if it ends here.
Magnoliaorchard chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Hermiones middle name is jean
sevannah chapter 13 . 4/5/2014
this is a great story a little lost at times but its amazing i fell like im there great job
sarsh chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
this was alright. I think it could have been more detailed cause its pretty short but I enjoyed it
Guest chapter 14 . 6/25/2013
This story is amazing.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/28/2013
This was the cutest short story ever... Great plot :)
Qu33rzi chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
middle name for Hermione is JEAN.

Just a thought.

Nice idea though, can't wait to finish your story!
ANGELSHRISHTI chapter 14 . 2/26/2012
this is a nice story!
kaile12 chapter 14 . 10/18/2011
wah! I love it! :D
freesha chapter 14 . 10/4/2011
oh my god you are so awesome! this story is Aaaaaamazing 333
EmeraldGoddess52 chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Isn't Hermione's middle name Jean?
pheobep3 chapter 14 . 12/28/2010
Good Job
Lena xo chapter 14 . 11/15/2010
GASP

I reckon there should've been a flashback at the end but if there's a sequel I'm not complaining. Awesome job!

Love,

Lena xo
ExTaCy925 chapter 14 . 8/22/2010
that wazz a great story i love it!
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