|Reviews for Spots on Shadows|
| ZE Bri-0n chapter 4 . 5/26
Aww, no mages?
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| Jaceca2002 chapter 11 . 2/25/2010
Hmm.. Not bad. Though needs a little work. Chapters are a little too short. Doesn't give you enough time to share the details of the plot properly. In fact, if you want some good advice on improving. I suggest you check this guide out: docs./Doc?dociddqdvgk2_45ggm5dgcx&hlen
Sometimes truthfully brutal, but very helpful. As for borg rabbit's comment about Hoard, he's totally correct. Horde is a teeming mob, or political division of Asian nomads. A Hoard is basically a collection, or to collect goods or artifacts to keep for yourself or the like.
| firelordeg chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
great chapter a bit short but thank you for sharing it please update again a.s.a.l.a.
| borg rabbit chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
Horde should be spelled 'Hoard'. JRR Tolkien couldn't be wrong. 'Horde' would be a mob of Mongols sacking Peking.
Chapters are good but short and long between, but that just means its easier to read a few prior chapters to refresh.
| Sydonai chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
Hengeyokai are different than the "Sunset People", for instance there are Hakken in Japan in the place of Garou, basicaly the same species, but with a drastically altered culture(serving a Daimyo, no Lupus, ect.).
| borg rabbit chapter 10 . 11/24/2008
Nice enough, but its been a while. Had to read from the beginning to refresh. Looking forward to the next.
| Sly chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
The Randomly capitalized words Are very Distracting
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 9 . 6/11/2006
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x3) and tranning start.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 8 . 6/11/2006
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x3) Ren is so right about Ranma.
| borg rabbit chapter 9 . 6/11/2006
Fascinating story. Is there any Gold Digger connection?
| Innortal chapter 9 . 6/10/2006
Weird. Very weird. But still good to read.
| Shakeval chapter 7 . 12/8/2005
i find it most interesting that nabiki or one of the others haven't accidently shifted while ranma was around.
so how will ren react to being hit by a large chi blast?
and how long until ranma just snaps and runs off on a "training trip" without plans of coming back...oh lets say america and...maybe atlanta, maybe meets a family with the last name of Diggers, its a thought.
great chapter, hope for more
| Alex Ultra chapter 7 . 6/14/2005
Interesting... and you're right, your style does grow on one, although you do have distinct grammar errors outside of dialogue that would need to be cleared up (such as omitting certain words and then that spell-checker thing of replacing words...), but the 'special-ness' (as I am wont to say) of this fic is enough to allow one to overlook such errors as being 'trivial'.
As such, I shall grant you an 'A-minus with honors'.
I am looking forward to further Contributions. :)
Alex Ultra: Trivialities Are Sometimes The Most Important Parts
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 7 . 4/26/2005
I just finish reading chapter 1-7 and I LOVE THEM!