Reviews for Good Things About Archons
Blissfulnightmare's True Form chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I still think there should be a small sequal to this. Please continue?
Blissfulnightmare chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Please make a sequal! I love it! When I finished the game, I couldn't help but pout and die a little inside. I never thought that there could be a way around the terrible ending. But what you wrote makes sense, so you should continue it. ...please? ;.;
God.Well not really chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
that was good...can u add another chapter...like about raziel and kain's new freindship...maybe janos can take them on a day trip...

Btw, i think that plan would work...
Takachi chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
That was so good. You must be a quite kind-hearted person to risk losing your job for other's entertainment. I loved it!

It inspired me too. I have actually also always wanted to read something about Raziel returning.

And I dont mind that Janos is a bit OOC. That just added the forever popular humor .
Little-Emms chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Sorry, couldn't be bothered to sign in. I actually like the way you've portrayed Janos in this story - and the rest of the fic is very well written. I think you've done a good job and I enjoyed reading it.
Dark-Sephy chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
I also found it quite sad when Raziel sacrificed himself. And I thought this was quite a good idea. With the way how Kain acted at the end, I would think he'd go search for a way to get Raziel back out anyway. And knowing Kain, he'd find one way or another.

Love your writing by the way ) found it quite annoying that kicked you off.

Somehow Kain reminded me of Bakura here, by the way. Must be the sneaky cunning/making plans/psycho-ness. Maybe the white hair too.
sammyBlack chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
*pout* I thought Janos was cute. very fetching _ I can't see why anyone would like to flame you, *glomp* I adore you! (Although I was concidering it when I thought you'd leave Kain to have a love affair with Archon/Raziel. _ Urgh) Your writing is also very detailed and attractive, (but I could have used more spacing just because I was getting crosseyed) and you added just the right amount of *everything* to make a light, sweet comedy.

I don't *care* about how unlikely that may be, I loved the story, and I'm ready to bug you for more. I mean, this is quite a plot you've got going here, one that deffinetly could be expanded and looked *into*. I'm talking lemons, limes and porn through twenty chapters or so! _
HealerAriel chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Hey, I happen to love happy ending drivel! And this was well written, too. _ Merci beaucoup for writing it!
NightmareFX chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
HAPPY DRIVEL! I love that stuff. Depressing stuff makes me sad...hm, dur..but oh well. And Kain going so far for his beauriful Raziel...wonderous. I like it! Makes me want more. Ever think or writing a sequel? I'm a fanfic/yaoi whore, I know...-; But oh well. Anyways, keep up the good work!

Mally
Yaoi Diva chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Wonderful! That was one of the most well written, humorous,thoughtful Lok fics I have read.

Oh don't worry about impracticality! Hell, Kain's fighting the wheel of fate. If there is no more destiny than one would assume it could create all kinds of loopholes in the timeline big enough for Raziel to crawl through. _

I would also like to say that I loved your fanfiction "Bruises" as well. Er... you are the same Koneko Shido are you not? If you wrote a sequel to either of these fics you would make my day. Once again great story, you are a true inspiration to Kain/Raziel fans everywhere (myself included).
Rosenrot chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Oh, dude, you have made my day! :D

I've been waiting for you do to another LOK fiction ever since I discovered 'Bruises' (which was bloody brilliant, I might add).

And don't worry about getting things wrong. They're just small details. Your quality of writing easily overcomes them.

And if you bring out a sequel to 'Bruises' or write more LOK fiction I will love you forever...uh...yeah ;;

Very nice work
Varyssa chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
Oh who cares if it's a little illogical? It was great! Yay! Raziel's back! I love stories where he comes back! And stories where Raziel and Kain are actually friends...or special friends as the case may be.

If you lose your job it was worth it! Never say no to inspiration and inspiration canm hit at the most inconveniant times...the inspiring thoughts for Mioko hit me while I was washing dishes...*sigh*

Well done and a Merry Christmas to you! x
Schuldig Schwarz chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
First of all I would like to tell you that I greatly enjoyed this piece of writing. It was funny, logical and nicely told. The way you potrayed Kain was very good (with all the arrogance) and Janos was delicously naive (although your right, slightly OOC). I would LOVE to see another part to this story (lemon would be more than nice ;)). Good work!
Kinr chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Lovet it
Smoke chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
You had the monks cowering in the corner of a round room. Don't you realise that round rooms do not have corners, and therefore they cannot huddle there? giggle Sorry, I just felt like giving you a bit of the expected attitude. I know that it's an easy mistake to lose track of things like that.

Yeah, Janos is a bit of a flake. I think that it's more of being a bit mixed-up. The demon dimension will do that to a body. I imagine that he found a way to escape the demon dimension, and probably helped Kain re-make the pillars. He just took a little Hylden brain along for the ride.

I'm not going to put forth my reason for why it won't work. I do hope for something emotional between Raziel and Kain, but why can't you be unique and make them have a normal father-son type of relationship instead of the incest that everyone else insists on?

Kain's attitude through this was kinda fun. He seems sick of everything, and forgetting how to be in control of himself. When he was dealing with the first monk, he shouldn't have snapped his kneck but instead done something slow and graphic.

Speaking of graphic, Raziel's rebirth was something graphic all right. Where you eneded it was a good place, but do you think that you could revisit that reality again for fits and giggles?
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