A very enjoyable story! Thank you for writing and sharing your words.

Thanks for another creative "supposal" on the Harry Potter story. I consistently find your writing enjoyable and thoughtful, especially in your ability to show character development. I hope you keep growing as a writer.

Very creative, interesting story. One suggestion for possible future edit: Given how reluctant Harry was to lead the DA, his immediate acceptance of the teaching offer seems too quick. I would have expected him to ask for time to think about it, and probably talk with Hermionie about it.

Otherwise, I am quite enjoying your story.

It was fun reading this take on Harry’s profession, and especially a refreshing change of Dumbledore offering solid assistance, training and insight. All that I wish for tio wrap up the story is what Dumbledore goes on to do next. Thanks for this story!

Old Crow, this was very different, but also veryfun. it was interesting to see a competent Dumbledore

I enjoyed this story A LOT ! Thank you

This was great! I like how much of it took place in the muffle world- but with magic! And this is definitely one of the better stories I’ve read in terms of Remus’s backstory being fleshed out. It makes a lot more sense that way than it does in canon. Very satisfying read!

UGH way too many chances are being handed out.

Remus had no chance and Percy effectively got him killed. I would NOT give Percy any chances.

And because the Weasels raised the moron as well, I certainly would not be helping the moron in any way shape or form.

The weasels need to learn, understand and accept that there are CONSEQUENCES for ones action!

How can Harry CONJUER pizza for the stupid greedy moron? Everyone knows that FOOD cannot be CONJURED!

I really enjoyed your story.

"We don't even have a breathing requirement for a teaching position" the best line ever I laughed so hard

I thought you were writing Ron so well, to have him taken out due to shock/crucio well it feels lacking and to be so lacklustre after it. I get it he can be difficult to write it is easy to foist him off as the village idiot or jealous git, but you had done neither while still retaining some of his positive traits. To reduce his impact in Harry's life to mere buddy like that for me isn't ideal when you had a good foundation. It is my one bug bear so far by an otherwise outstanding story.

Great story, thank you

Thank you again for a special story in which people say and act like real people. I also appreciate your keeping that which is often said explicitly, mentioned implicitly Nd off screen. It believe it takes more talent to write like that than otherwise. Welldone, good sir scribe!

Wow! What an amazing story! Thank you much for sharing!