Reviews for Summer Pen Pals
thenlaugh chapter 4 . 12/31/2004
he he... i love penpal stories! update quickly!
Shani chapter 4 . 12/27/2004

I waited so long and:


How is my website?



Love Lots!

meenyrocks chapter 4 . 12/27/2004
this is kool. but i do think that you could have done this b8r, cos i think that you could have made it more funny cos it is james. i think he could have said a bit more too.
you muggle chapter 4 . 12/26/2004
lol, i love the little letter idea thing. are all the chapter's going to be letter between james and lily?
Katsy17 chapter 4 . 12/26/2004
cool! update please!
meenyrocks chapter 3 . 12/23/2004
i liked it was interesting am dying to see what james says!
Shani chapter 3 . 12/22/2004

What can I say?It's a very good story with very very short since I know you persenoly(sp?) and live in a different country insted of calling you I will tell my opinion here...

1.6th years have OWLs?NO!I think...

made Lily too much like yourself.

Sarah to email me.

is the funniest email I have ever written!

5.I didn't know you write love stories?What is with all this crushing and stuff?


7.I like your story(I said that already!)but I think it's funny that you did a whole chapter as and A/N!

me back and add some more chapters!

was hard finding you story.

10.I love and miss you so much!

Well that I think is good for now so I will be going back and I'll send my story when I'm done edeting it but I'm not finished with the story yet...

Love and Miss,

Katsy17 chapter 3 . 12/21/2004

yeh it's good. update soon

hazeled eye marauder chapter 3 . 12/21/2004
like i've said efore i think your story is great please update soon
potterlover chapter 3 . 12/21/2004
you seem to be developing the characters in the story unlike any other story i have read so far. this is a good thing.
evenstar of the undyinglands chapter 2 . 12/20/2004
a good intro. i like your writing style. i love the sarcastic relationship between lily and james. however i am not sure if lily would want to be a swimmer/ dancer. i always imagined her to want to go to the ministry or something.

can't wait until u update.
Katsy17 chapter 1 . 12/19/2004

not bad. could you please update soon

thenlaugh chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
This sounds really good! but you should change it to seventh year, because thats when they started dating! but no worries, its coming to my favs either way!
Drakulya chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Looks like a promising start. But I think you need to add more descriptive detail about each new character.

Is Alexandra Potter James' sister?
Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wan chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
this looks like a promising story. update soon! :)
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