Reviews for A MarySue Just For You!
AndThenBurnTheAshes chapter 3 . 11/30/2013
BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh my Jashin...I'm actually crying now, I'm laughing so hard. This is beautiful!
And I need the next chapter.
Lagadatte chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
I can't... I can't breathe... :D

You, my dear (btw, thank you for the lovely review ), should feel terrible for making me almost spit my lungs out in laughter, although somehow I don't feel entirely too bad for it and in fact, in hindsight, it might be considered a most apt end for a fanfiction lover :p

Now that being said, I just wanted to drop a line (the 100th line, I feel special! Activate that Prettigan... it's super effective!), telling you that I adore the idea and that it was amazingly executed xD The world needs more fics like those, although I suppose the excess amount of actual Mary-Sue fics can be seen as a separate parody genre that can hardly be outdone at times... In any case, applause, this was simply brilliant!
The dark of night5 chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
I'm favoriting this because I almost died of laughter reading it. Every other sentence I would realize that I had read a bad fic with something just like was great.
Anonymous Reviewer-T chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
CATFIGHT! XD Go... wait, this picture does not look right...

I agree, dubbed anime can be somewhat horrendous at times...

You know, someone out there wrote a fanfic about dubbed and/or censored Naruto anime, it's quite funny...
Do you know Tayuya? And Hidan? Well, let's see if you can guess... :3

The story's listed under my favourites, just thought you'd like to know...
Fig Newton Salad chapter 3 . 3/24/2010
This is seriously one of the most hilarious fanfics of all time! And HOORAY FOR BLOODY MARY-SUE MAYHEM! *applauds* Why not add the whole, "think [appropriate outfit, situation, etc] from the anime" to explain a character's actions? Definitely goes hand in hand with the Mary-Sue.

Keep up the hilarity, and keep up the writing! Can't wait to read more of this.
HetChrome chapter 3 . 3/6/2010

The painn...

I love you. Seriously.

It's sad now, because when one thinks about it, it's virtually impossible to create a non-Mary-Sue in a canon setting. The rest of us Fanfic writers STRIVE to keep it out, but...


Either make the character extremely young (before puberty)

Make the character extremely old (And no one shall read it)

or just not give any personal info about the girl...

T.T Life is tough.

Thank you for writing!
PureWaterLily chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Oh wow... I think my brain melted into goo.

But seriously? When WAS the last time there was a fanfic that didnt have selfinserts, CharacterXOC, horrible summaries, OOCness, and incest/rape/pwps?

This fanfic pwned all of those because i died laughing. Either that or i suffered from uncontrollable twitching.
Quasi-Verbatim chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Dragonmanga chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
LOL! Love this! Death to Mary Sues! Nuff Said

Death to Dubs! God, if they're going to dub it, 1) Use the correct terms(me and my shadow!), 2) Find GOOD voice actors (Naruto... nuff said), 3)Don't edit the original anime (WHY DO THEY TAKE OUT SO MUCH BLOOD!), and 4) TRANSLATE IT CORRECTLY! God, if they're going to "translate" the jutsus, might as well call Naruto Fishcake and Kakashi Scarecrow!

I know you meant this to be bad, but it turned out just as a really nice crack!


I just KNOW the fans in Japan are cursing our name. I don't even want to think about Shippuuden...

Lovely bashing and crack fic
Blu Rai chapter 3 . 12/26/2007
I probably laughed 15 times for each chapter. Especially at the Prettigan xD

She should have some weird demon in the demon Zebra or something that makes her hair white and black...and then her and Gaara and Naruto can be all, "We're all the same, YAY"

But you might face possible death to the Gaara fangirls. I think it'd be funny though. ]

Update soon, I love it!

-rises fist in the air- death to mary-sue!
SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
hahaha i luv this story its so funny, and btw rasengan would also be called 'swirling ball of power' in english dub an i heard that some people were thinking of re-naming the cast with english names like saskues name would be peter, sakura would be beth, itachi would bejohn and this is the worst one...naruto would be named...collen, very scary anywayz luv the story post soon
EnergyHawk chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
I love it!

Keep writing cz I'm ROTFLMAOD!

ehe... ja.

MakalaMea chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
AHAHA...i hate the dubbed anime naruto...who wrote the lines anywayz? should get fired...the translations suck and they add in random words...lik i watched the newest dubbed one just cuz i was bored and naruto says 'i'll wipe that cynical smirk off your face.' and i sorta bugged out and was like CYNICAL? is that supposed to be in his vocabulary... 0-0...blasted american translators kill the personality of the characters...haha im ranting pwe
MakalaMea chapter 2 . 6/24/2007
wow...this is halerious...ehe...not sarcasm u kno cuz ppl always think imbeing sarcastic and mean but i'm not trying to and my intentions are sincere and all and ur wondering why is the nutcase bothering me with her stupid and useless reviews well cuz this nutcase is bored and has nothing to do at 1:13 in the morning...ciao
MakalaMea chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
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