Reviews for Where Young Waters Run
Tallest Green chapter 4 . 10/10/2006
An orignal LOTR story very interesting please continue
Laes chapter 3 . 12/28/2004 asked me to review so I am. I have to say that the story idea is original enough, the plot so far is fairly exciting, but you do need to watch your grammar. There are a lot of little things that catch the eye and draw attention to the mistakes. Out of place apostrophies, or ones that are missing entirely, some tense shifts with your verbs, and a couple spelling errors too. Other than that I think it isn't too bad.