Reviews for Wind and Sea
Hazel Wish chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
It didn't suck! It was lovely! The rhyming went well and the message was beautiful. I love this part: I always walk barefoot in the sea that’s so blue. This way, I am walking with you. Wonderful job!
Lacy chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Amazing. You are fantastic! I am so impressed.
Eruwen chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
This is a beautiful poem. It gave me chills, good jb. :)
Generally Maz chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
That's so kawaii ! O
Kyouryoku Senshi chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
That's a great poem! Keep up the awesome work!
YagyuJubei-chan chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
That was good! Stop being so hard on yourself yo!
Doot Doot dead account chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
O.O that's AMAZING! you certainly do NOT suck at poetry!
Neptunes Tears chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
for as simple as this is, its really lovely nice work.
Fia chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
Hi, how dare u say u suck at poetry! ggr.. anywho, u DO NOT suck at poetry, and i know this 4 a fact, cause when i was reading your poem, i almost cried (see how good your poetry is?). in fact, i'm crying now: WAH! see? so.. all us adoring readers think that u should make this the prologue of an actual STORY (well, at least, that's what i think u should do *hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink*)! like i said, please update soon!