Reviews for A BITE Through
The Wolf Lady chapter 3 . 4/22/2009
*giggles hard* Yay! I liked it! There are way to many Tsume-yaoi stories, this was a lovely refresher
Sonar chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I love the line that Kiba says at the end. Good story so far.
Ookami93 chapter 3 . 4/7/2006
very cute man read these reviews and update soon
Ookami93 chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
heheheheehehehe that was good continue
HollowBlackCat chapter 3 . 1/8/2006
Mwahhahahaha...I love it so far!
Nostalgia Nut chapter 3 . 7/8/2005
I've read this before just haven't reviewed...

(flops to the floor on hands and knees) forgive me! I will never commit such shame ever again! I love the couple TsumeBlue, please update!

And here's the face you make.. O_o
L. Damarik Laizare chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
You want a review? You're going to get praise instead, how's that? XD

Poor poor Hige...he just can't win...but Tsume on the other hand is winning when it seems like it's only going to be a pain in his tail...

And Toboe? He's just a bit confused, but it all works out. Kiba, the great mediator(what? he is...) keeps everyone mostly informed.

You stop writing, I bomb your house with SPAM! :O

XD Keep up the writing, it ish burry burry gude!
unknown chapter 3 . 4/10/2005
very, very good story. your are great writer.I Really Like This Story I Really Hope You update very very very soon!
heykyra13 chapter 3 . 2/21/2005
Kiba: *blink*... *blink*... um... *blink*... hang on... still thinking... *blink*

Tsume: *inspects pants mournfully* Damn... now i might have to actually buy new ones...

Kiba: *blink*... um... yeah... *blink*...

Tsume: *looks at Kiba with a death glare* Don't say anything about my pants...

Kiba: *chokes back a laugh, challenging Tsume's death glare with one of innocence* Why... whatever could you mean?

Tsume: *with his back to the camera* let's see, if I order them on Tuesday, then get fitted on Wednesday, they should be ready by Monday . . ..

Kiba: *snort* not if Blue has anything to say about it...

Tsume: *whirls around, snarling* What... did... you...just... SAY? *curls up in a fetal position* My poor pants . . ..

Kiba: There, there, wittle wolfie... it s'okay... *pats dark grey wolfie's head solemnly*

Tsume: *now chibi-fied* whimper... *snaps back to reality* Don't touch me, Kiba.

Kiba: *grins, still patting head* Aw, how cute... you actually sound like you mean it...

Tsume: . . .

Kiba: *smirks smugly* That's what I thought...

Tsume: Feh.

Kiba: *shakes head, disappointedly* What are you, a wolf? Or a half dog-demon?

Tsume: Um... false?

Kiba: *nods* And that, boys and girls, is why the white wolf leads the pack...

Tsume: *holding back another "feh" of disgust, turns his back to the camera and begins fiddling with his knife* If you were anyone else I would have killed you by now.

Kiba: *rolls eyes* Right... like I haven't heard THAT one before...

Tsume: Must... restrain... FEH!

Kiba: *shrugs* guess you couldn't restrain, then?... To quote a rather ... *thinks about word carefully* "special" wolf... RESIST!

Tsume: *can't type straight now to save his life*

Damn... damn... more damn... ugh.

Kiba: *chortles* looks like someone's using up the last of their "selected" vocabulary...

Tsume: *looks around* isn't this a ... oh, i don't know. ... a review page? aren't we supposed to be reviewing something, Kiba?

Kiba: *glances around thoughtfully* Hmm... Wow, I guess you're actually right... *cough**cough*foronce*cough*cough* Hmm... *looks back to author* Well, granted that you didn't happen to merely ignore this... um, novel... and actually read through to this point, I wish you good luck in your future endeavors and congratulate you on a... very entertaining fic... Of course, don't know why you would have read through this in the first place... but hey, that's just me...

Tsume: *wakes up* Wha-? Huh? Oh yeah ... Nice job... very nice. I was the one who found it and showed it to Kiba *accepts yet another pat on the head* *holds up thumbs-up sign and yells, " Love and peace!"

Kiba: *fur hackles* WHAT DO YOU MEAN, YOU WERE ASLEEP! *sighs and shakes head, throwing Tsume a murderous glare* Lazy glutton...

Tsume: *pulls chicken feather from mouth* What, me? A glutton? I don't know what you're talking about... *burp* 'scuse me...

Kiba: *Without warning, grabs Tsume by the ear, hauling him away from the computer* Come on, Wolfie... you don't need any more chicken... or time to review... in fact, there's only one thing I can think of that you DO need...

Tsume: *holding ear* Ow, ow, watch the EARRINGS, will ya? Geez ... oh, ha ha... let me guess...*looks down at torn and shredded pants, then looks up to glare at Kiba once more* I swear, if you say one more word about my clothes ...

Kiba: *With a devilish smirk, twists Tsume's ear violently, earning a loud whimper* Now, how did you put it?... oh yes... "One more word about my clothes". So, what happens next, now that I said it?

Tsume: *tears forming in the corners of his eyes* Curse you, AquaScum ... uh, Kiba! *tries to loosen earring* Dang it, it's stuck. *hangs head and sighs, shooting dark, angry glances at the white wolf* One day... very soon...*growls*

Kiba: *sighs mournfully, patting Tsume's head* I know, I know... your pants' soul is bound to be resurrected sooner or later... *lifts head, grinning* But until then... you gotta just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming swimming swimming... la la lala... la la lala...

Tsume: *staring at Kiba unbelieving* I can't believe you just sang that... *shakes head* My God, what is the world coming to? *tries to liberate ear from Kiba's grasp, without success*

Kiba: *releases ear obligingly* A gruesome and bloody end, that's what... And why should you be surprised at my singing? It's a more refined art form of howling... and again, kiddies, one of the many reasons why I lead the pack...


Tsume: (grumbling) Oh, sure, he gets the last word in...

Kiba: Of course I do... SO STOP TYPING!
LUKE7MM chapter 3 . 1/21/2005
I like relly long fan fics
Lady Isaiah chapter 3 . 1/19/2005
Great just great!

“And that Hige is how I know.”

That was just hilarious. My friend, L.B. (i'M TO LAZY TO WRITE OUT YER NAME.) Ops. That was the most hilarious thing that has happened in your entire TsumeBlue relationship. good work freind, now igotta go do my homework and, what was it ib english since i left early?

Hyper Musician chapter 3 . 1/17/2005
I LOVE IT! FINALLY! I've been waiting for this day forever! I always thought that Tsume and Blue would be better together! Yeah! I'm so happy! Great Story! Update soon! VERY SOON!

Goth Musician
Maria chapter 2 . 1/15/2005

Wolf's Crack!


BTW: You have an excellent writing style, and your gramma and spelling are to die for! It's so comfortable reading your fics. It just kinda flows.
iMomo chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
OMG! This is now my favorite story in the whole world! WE MUST SEE MORE TSUME/BLUE FANFICS, DAMMIT! WE MUST! Ahem... Make another fic with these two, please? Again, this is my new favorite story! It was THAT great!
ferretbaby chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
This is funny, you have to continue! I found like, what, 2 tsume and blue fics out there and your grammers actually readable and it makes sense. I'll positively melt into a pile of turds if you don't at least write one more chapter.. or you know, a couple more just for fun 3. Its not like i don't already worship the groud you walk on, think of the golden statues I'll errect in your honor if ya write more!
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