Reviews for The Lost |
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![]() ![]() What did you do to me I was crying the whole time though this review is a bit late though. Thanks anyway. |
![]() ![]() Lol I can’t believe people would just email you instead checking your fics |
![]() ![]() Can't believe you killed Naruto off you cunt! Sasgay is WORSE than Itachi ever was! And how typical of suckura to still be a fangirl. She deserves death! |
![]() ![]() good but there was -neechan because is female -nichan is male |
![]() ![]() WARNING SOME PARTS OF THIS IS A SPOILER love the plot don't like it when it says a bet kyuubi doesn't do that naruto won't do that either but i like it when it says that kyuubi takes over naruto at night but you might be forgetting that in the manga stop reading this is a spoiler for some well in the manga naruto rips off the seal and lets the nine tails help him in the fight against madara uchia |
![]() ![]() btw teh 'ramen man'... his name is Teuchi... Naruto calls him Teuchi-san.. his Daughter is Ayame if you didn't know that as well... come to me for names and spellings bcuz if I don't know em(Which i normally do) I has the power of fast internet and google! |
![]() ![]() wait you said 5 pages... wtf? my chapters are 3-5 and they are 4-5 times longer then this... you must be using something different or some huge ass font... |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you even bother to read the story guidelines so you would know what are, and are not allowed to do? this first chapter can get your story deleted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG IN CANt STAND IT!, ITS TEMARI! FOR GODS SAKE! i just cant stand hen ppl mispsell things it drives me nuts! . srry to burst but its torture! plz dont hate me! T.T |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah... normally id yell(figuratively speaking) at u for messing up obito's death, but someone's alredy done it |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur response to Hisoka316... temari's a former member of SUNA, its sand in japanese, not sauna ( hi im temari i come from a hot room! lol no) |
![]() ![]() ![]() its temAri! god di i have to correct every name u write (no but some of them)! |