Reviews for The Lost
x chapter 8 . 2/22/2014
good but there was -neechan because is female -nichan is male
someone chapter 14 . 6/9/2012
WARNING SOME PARTS OF THIS IS A SPOILER love the plot don't like it when it says a bet kyuubi doesn't do that naruto won't do that either but i like it when it says that kyuubi takes over naruto at night but you might be forgetting that in the manga stop reading this is a spoiler for some well in the manga naruto rips off the seal and lets the nine tails help him in the fight against madara uchia
Dark0592 chapter 10 . 8/25/2011
btw teh 'ramen man'... his name is Teuchi... Naruto calls him Teuchi-san.. his Daughter is Ayame if you didn't know that as well... come to me for names and spellings bcuz if I don't know em(Which i normally do) I has the power of fast internet and google!
Dark0592 chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
wait you said 5 pages... wtf? my chapters are 3-5 and they are 4-5 times longer then this... you must be using something different or some huge ass font...
OnGuard chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
did you even bother to read the story guidelines so you would know what are, and are not allowed to do? this first chapter can get your story deleted.
Erora chapter 10 . 11/16/2009
LOVE IT! Keep up the great work!
TheBlackPheonixNightengaleFudo chapter 16 . 12/5/2008
The Guy Who Writes chapter 11 . 8/18/2008
OMFG IN CANt STAND IT!, ITS TEMARI! FOR GODS SAKE! i just cant stand hen ppl mispsell things it drives me nuts! . srry to burst but its torture! plz dont hate me! T.T
Taeniaea chapter 16 . 7/18/2008
great story
RaptorJr chapter 13 . 3/10/2008
yeah... normally id yell(figuratively speaking) at u for messing up obito's death, but someone's alredy done it
RaptorJr chapter 12 . 3/10/2008
ur response to Hisoka316... temari's a former member of SUNA, its sand in japanese, not sauna ( hi im temari i come from a hot room! lol no)
RaptorJr chapter 11 . 3/10/2008
its temAri! god di i have to correct every name u write (no but some of them)!
RaptorJr chapter 7 . 3/10/2008
jitsu? wtf is a jitsu? ITS JUTSU FOOL!
RaptorJr chapter 3 . 3/10/2008
its chidOri and shinobI
RaptorJr chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
chidOri or raikiri
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