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   VentMonster chapter 14 . 1/10/2005 woot a update love this story *snickers evily* wonder what tsunade has instore for hinata and naruto he gave him leeway did he?how? update soon! must have more! more! more! |
| Hisoka316 chapter 14 . 1/10/2005 Another good chapter other than spelling errors, but as you said it isn't your fault. I think it was a little too short, should have got to Tsunade's plan for Naruto, but anyways, good chapter. |
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 14 . 1/10/2005 Poor Naruto, he's about to get a crash course in dodging an angry Tsunade's fists. I think even Kyuubi would be scared, considering Tsunade can use one of Gamabunta's giant daggers like it is nothing. Now, what will Jiraiya's reaction to this new developement be? |
| dojo chapter 14 . 1/10/2005 like it, anymore scene with NarHin? Keep this pairing! |
| grimlockfan84 chapter 13 . 1/9/2005 Awesome story can't wait to read the next chapters. |
| treepresident chapter 13 . 1/6/2005 YAY YA Y YAY YAY YAY UPDATE U EVIL PERSON! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! LLALALALALALALALA UPDATE! |
| dangerous chapter 13 . 1/5/2005 Dude the story line is great and pays well on the characters cannon personialites even with new information tgat is a damn fine acomplish ment |
| Iro-Ao chapter 13 . 1/4/2005 I LOVE THIS STORY!... UPDATE UDATE UPDATE! ... um... hope you caught my drift... LUV IT! |
| snow child yukiko-chan chapter 13 . 1/4/2005 write more soon plz. |
| Expired Doughnuts chapter 13 . 1/4/2005 Interesting idea. What does this "human Kyuubi" look like? |
| FairyQilan chapter 13 . 1/3/2005 So what'll he tell her? |
| FairyQilan chapter 10 . 1/3/2005 Did you know that you're spelling 'Ramen' wrong? In case you didn't, you are. Please fix it before i go insane. |
| Kazan-Anoe chapter 13 . 1/3/2005 Sleepy kitty probably typoed for this . and that would be a face. see the little eyes? your story is good, you gave off a not-so-great impression with your first chapter. Polls arnt allowed on last time I checked, so you should probably close it up before your story gets deleted. As for my vote, I like longer chapters, and they're good when your story is closer to completion. It's harder to read short chapters then medium chapters, Its harder to read long -LONG- chapters compared to medium chapters... my suggestion is to go for 50-80 words per chapter Its a wide range... you need to explain kyuubi's body more... what the hell does it look like? dont keep us in the dark... My next thing is that 'Kuni' is Kunai... you either misspelled it or it was a typo... several times. Also, You misspelled Temaries name... I'm pretty sure thats how its spelt, but Im sure its not Temori... |
| Sleepy Kitty chapter 13 . 1/3/2005 -.- it means that fanfic-net is being a meanie and deleted my comment (and I can't remeber what I said now... it did have something to do with being more of a zapper than a clawer though...) . without the spaces is what I had originally put with coments . Why exactly that would be restircted I wouldn't know... |
| Sirus183 chapter 13 . 1/3/2005 How can you end it like that. It was geting Good. Well UPDATE SOON! |