| Reviews for The Lost |
|---|
   MangaFreak15 chapter 4 . 11/7/2006 Psyched! Hinata's down and crying! |
| MangaFreak15 chapter 3 . 11/7/2006 O, what will happen now? Tsunade is a medic, but did Naruto die already? |
| MangaFreak15 chapter 2 . 11/7/2006 It's a good chapter, but Sauske is actually spelled Sasuke, Uzamaki is actually spelled Uzumaki, and though most stories say sennin, it should be sannin. Great job on the story line though. |
| Silver Warrior chapter 15 . 11/6/2006 wow, pretty cool. Chapter are short but this does appear to be one of your earlier works. |
| twerplified chapter 1 . 10/25/2006 This is one of my most favorite series, although I can't think of a name to rename it yet, I hope you will find one to your own pleasure ) |
| Kadessor chapter 16 . 9/7/2006 umm kk |
| Manatheron chapter 13 . 8/22/2006 Tsunade has no Idea who his father is at this point |
| Manatheron chapter 11 . 8/22/2006 People don't recognise naruto, The ramen man doesn;t recognize naruto. Just changing his close and the fact that he's not running around screaming at the top of his lungs is enough to make everyone think he is just A foreigner who bears a passing resembelence to naruto. |
| Manatheron chapter 6 . 8/22/2006 Gai, not Guy Tsunade has been a nin for over 30 years, not 50 |
| Manatheron chapter 5 . 8/22/2006 Call them 'The konoha Gennin' rather than the rookie 9, Sasuke wouldn't wear the jacket, but he might refuse to release it, even in sleep. |
| Manatheron chapter 4 . 8/22/2006 Mention that Gaara and his sibilings had come to investigate because the energy release had given off visable light, and Gaara had felt the vaugest of calls for assistance. |
| Manatheron chapter 3 . 8/22/2006 Italicize the Script from the first Chapter, Change the distance to Leaf Village, Add a little BLurb from Hashi, talk about the reations of a Dark man in a dim bar |
| Manatheron chapter 2 . 8/22/2006 Move thoughts to Italics, clean up the speeches a little bit, and Smooth out your transitions |
| Lady Tomboy chapter 16 . 8/15/2006 I really like this story so far :) I haven't really read a lot of naruto fanfics so far but I really like where this is going. just saw a few spelling errors here and there (sorry forgot to copy them down in order to tell yah where and stuff) but other than that it's very nice. Good job |
| Rantingmonkey chapter 10 . 7/19/2006 fyi, it's Ramen, not Raman. Also, i think your writing could use a little more description about how things look. If nothing else it will add some length to the chapters with minimal effort. Still enjoying your fic! Ciao! |