|Reviews for The Long Day|
| dolphinrain chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
another great story. I had liked this episode and Kartas was a great character.
| samkicksass chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Thanks for this addition! Nicely done.
| Angel LeeAnn chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
This was spectacular! And all of them were true to their characters. I really, really enjoyed this! I was kind of upset that they (the show) never addressed Roxton's wounds. So, reading this was refreshing...and satisfied my curiosity.
| madforRoxton chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Thank you for the perfect end to Prodigal Father.
| Jaclyn chapter 1 . 4/4/2002
Good of you to write this. I also thought Prodigal Father wasn't resolved at all. Good characterization here. M acted exactly as she should have. They should have put this in the episode...
Also, I liked how you tied everything together with the Queensbury thread.
| Colorado chapter 1 . 7/18/2001
You continue to be one of the most consistently good writers here. You capture the characters just right, your details are great, and the writing is balanced. I look forward to reading future stories!
| Ana chapter 1 . 7/8/2001
Another very worth effort, congratulations.
| Maggie chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
This was a good fanfic
| CAP chapter 1 . 4/10/2001
Susan, your story arc is impressive. I haven't gotten my season I tapes in yet (should be any day now)...but when I do I make sure I view the Prodigal Father post haste. Your continued story line should wrap up those nagging little threads of scriptwriting that needed attention.
| mary whimsey chapter 1 . 3/26/2001
What a wonderful and satisfying ending to the story. I wish Susan was really writing for the show.
| Alan chapter 1 . 3/15/2001
I think that this is the best fan fiction here. you are extremely talented.
Wrote you some comments under fl_guy on tlw message board under Prodigal Father too.
Awesome job. It was amazing.
| Shelby chapter 1 . 3/14/2001
Love all your storys you should definitly write more these are so good.
| Janet chapter 1 . 3/4/2001
Another great ep addition! It was certainly better than the piddly one minute
wrap-up we actually got from the show. The characters were true to form, and
logical. Keep up the good work!
| meagan chapter 1 . 2/28/2001
that was awesome! i loved the emotion that ron felt. the lil crying fest she had was so...what's the word...human. (which sometimes i forget she is) loved the marge/roxton parts, of course. great writing!
| goldfish chapter 1 . 2/28/2001
Excellent story! You have a great talent for writing a convincing and exciting plotline; the explorers and their characteristics were also wonderfully displayed. Great job, I can't wait to read more! *cough*writeaNedandVeronicastory*cough* :)