Reviews for Intrusion
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
ah so they didn't even know yet who Chris is...
dasengelhertzmitflugeln chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
hah haaaaaaaa. great
HauntedPast chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
more? :(
Loony Dagda chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
It's a shame you haven't done any more with this. I enjoyed reading it, but it just ended so abruptly.

Ciao XP

Mel chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Please, this is too good to be a one-shot.
Good Witch chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I just found this. Couldn't you write more? This is good
girlofcandy chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
ha that was a big shock it was great do you have sequel
tyeke chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
can't you write more?

Nathy1000000 chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
This is really interesting! I wish it wasn’t only a one shot. I loved it! You are great describing feelings and action. I loved Chris-Crossed and your shot on Wyatt coming was just great. I also would have liked to see Wyatt coming on the show. This was just great!
StarWindDancer chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Oh wow, this story is intense and has such potential. Delightfully wicked and poor Chris the whitelighter carried off by evil, adult Wyatt. Whatever will happen? Will you tell us please?
Dirty Blondes chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
HEY! Leave us on a cliff hanger why dontcha! But i liked it! yeah it was innoative and very gripping! Then it ended! I wish I knew what happened next! Plz write a sequel!
phoeeebe chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
this chapter was amazing! write another one!
teal-lover chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
NO. Please dont end it there! It was really good & you should continue. You just meant the end of the first chapter, right? right? Oh come on. More please?
Kay the Klutz chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
You're going to end it like that? Please, add something, anything!
phoebe turner chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
please please please write another chapter, this was too good only for one chapter! i'll be waiting for the next one!
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