Reviews for Four
celerystalksatmidnight chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Well written and lovely and all of those wonderful things that remind me that i'm reading something that is art and not a game with other people's characters. Did you notice, though, that occasionally your verb tense does not agree with the story/sentence? (example: "“When’s the last time you sleep?”). Don't let my words harsh your mellow though, as it really was beautiful.
x se chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
That's kinda got an angsty twist... Well, I enjoyed reading. And yes, we will all hope Naruto and GamaBunta exchange sakazuki someday.
A. Non chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Interesting...I like it. _
Aternox chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is a very good fiction. Really. I love how you pictured Jiraiya. Really good work !

blue leafy chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
This is beautiful...
Sailor Comet chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
I liked this story a lot. Sympathized with Jiraiya a whole lot when he summoned Gamabunta while drunk, and the frog told him he was pathetic. Love the fact that it's resolved with a fight. .

You did a great job communicating his frustration with everything, and sometimes it was hard to read because that kind of frustration drives people to do stupid things, but it was a really good fic. Realistic.