It's a very interesting premise and I'd like to see where you're going with this. Though you could do with some beta'ing: you have qa few punctuation errors.

i like how you started it out. it has an interesting plot and i hope you update it soon. how long is it going to tkae for them to figure out that the person they can see through this uhh...thing that can see the future... is Harry. or is Harry going to fall through the thingy, before they figure it out? oh i cant wait! jeje. keep it up and update soon please!

~AshenWolf~ devoted reader.

p.s. I like James' comment about the "inner eye". it brought me back to Hermione;s comment about it from the movie. it made me laugh. _

Need more!